Adrenaline - Comments

Absolutely beautiful. There are few authors I say this to and I'm more than happy to tell you this: Beautiful. To be honest, I can't imagine a better way to write what you did. The repetition was quite impressive without going overboard and each segment short, yet detailed enough to create an imagine and allow for our imaginations to fill in the rest! Interesting choice of style.

This is absolutely fantastic!
Very well written. :)

This was brilliant. I really enjoyed the writing style; normally I get annoyed when writers keep repeating things, like you repeated 'adrenaline'. But in this case, I didn't mind. I love how the adrenaline kind of defined different moments in his life...the highs as well as the lows, y'know? I don't know if I'm making any sense, so I'll stop now.

Oh, and thank you for the formspring question, by the way. If you ever read it, I think you'll enjoy my answer.

Oh my gosh maddy, I absolutely LOVED it!!! There were a few grammar mistakes, but that's alright, I don't think there has ever been a piece of writing without at least one mistake in it. Trust me, I make tons of them...but you edit them, so it's all better! XD