Cliche Ending - Comments

I'm assuming this was written as a joke because this was teh epitome of cliche story haha. But interesting piece to say the least.

Oh..my...god.
Aha, I have to admit that I used to be a pretty big Jonas fangirl; still got a bit of a soft spot for them. However, this was hilarious. Just because it was so out there, y'know? Never in a million years would this have ever crossed my mind.
Well written, too, in a nice simple sorta style.
My only crit would be the layout; it was cool, but when the text and dots overlapped it was almost painful to read.

Hahaha! Damn Jonas brothers! You should've written the seen where they died :) I absolutely loved this! Vamps as jonas bros, HAHA! <3

Agh, this was kind of hard for me to read, with the white on black, but that's okay.
It was really funny, and it made me smile :D
Great job, deary.

This made me giggle throughout the whole thing.
I'm pretty tired, which probably made things even more amusing.
Great job on this. (:

Ha, this made me smile. I laughed throughout the whole thing. Nice job(:

I just want to start off that this story made me laugh. It really just made me smile and made my day.

I like the introduction paragraph. It had just the right amount of sarcasm in it. I picked up immediately, but it wasn’t overdone. It was still funny.

I enjoy how it mocks the type of fanfics in which the girl knows the band, but never really pays mind to them being famous and is just oblivious to the publicity they get. I also love how it mocks several stereotypes actually. I think you pulled it off nicely.

I like how it reads like a diary as well. I felt that gave it a bit more spice. It gave it that right amount of pizazz.

my face scrunching up like a pouty little kid’s.

I like your descriptions. Even though this is meant as satire and it’s meant to be cliche, the way you describe some things are just awesome.

There were five of them in the van and they all looked like they were in a gang…a very white gang.

That was my favourite line. It had me cracking up when I read it.

The end feels a bit rushed. That’s my only complaint. I felt it needed a little more to get there, but overall I loved this story. It felt like a short film my friends would make at school and that’s just fantastic. That means I could clearly visualise this and when I did I could also picture an audience laughing. You did such a great job. This is probably one of my favourite stories on Mibba. Nice work!

hahaha. nice! that was amusing, to say the least!! hahaha

Lol! That was so funny; even if it wasn't supposed to be.
I liked it though xD

Avenged Sevenfold vs. Jonas Brothers?
Avenged all the way.