Letters After The Rain - Comments

Oh my. This is just simply breathtaking.
There's no reason for you not to continue on with this story.
The characters are very interesting, very vivid.
The way it's written gave me a delightful imagery.
You're very talented my dear. You're a good, no wait, scratch that.
You're a wonderful writer. More fitting, eh?
~xo

Oh, this is lovely.

I really enjoy how extensive your vocabulary is - I get so tired of seeing the f word a hundred times a page in all of the other stories on here.

It's really a beautifully written piece, and you should continue it!

Being a guy I thing I have the right to comment xD I wish I could help, but you seem to have it all figured out. It's really well written, the characters are vivid, and it manages to put an image in your mind after just a few words. Great work overall.

There is that sentence where he says art 3 times in a row. I don't know if it was intentional but anyhow I don't think it's necessary. Just being a nitpick :D

I loved how you created this mystery aura around the girl. I don't know if I want to see it broken by writing from her POV...but who knows, right? I think you have the talent to pull it off. Make her as interesting on the inside as she is on the outside and I will be completely hooked.

Keep it up!