You're actually really good at writing in the first person, so don't worry too much. I also adored the ending. It was really simple, but said a lot. So, yeah, loved it. ^___^ xx
I loved this. It was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good. I mean, you did such a good job describing what Alex was thinking and how he was feeling and everything. I am in awe of this story right now, no joke. =)