This is pretty good (: I don't like how when it switches views it completely repeats what happened just from another pov. Because the way you two are writing makes it seem the same. There isn't that much different. It's still a good story line though and I think it will be great.
Okay, you seriously don't know how happy I am that you updated! Like seriously! Keep em coming guys! I really liked the chapter, THEY KISSED, awww. But poor Ian! My emotions are running haywire now. Please update soon!
Tee hee. I thought I would scare you into updating. Mwa ha ha. Anyways.... Oooh la la!!! Curious eh? Awesome. Ah but poor Parker, his girlfriend sucks. Big time. I don't like her at all. But awww. I want more, soon please!!!
Will you guys hurry up? Please!!! Seriously, I am gonna start sending you messages and writing on your profiles and bugging the crap out of you. Seriously. Not kidding. The annoying messages start when I get back from camping, if there are no new chapters that is. Please hurry up! I am in love with this story! Is that weird to say? Eh, no matter. Please update soon!