This Modern Love - Comments

awwww!!! i can't believe that was the end!!!
And to think that, in a way, if I remember correctly, I convinced you to put up this story. I think. I'm not entirely sure if that's how it went down, lol.
This story is amazing.
I am so sad to see it go :(
But, nonetheless, you are an amazing writer, and I admire you.

but i loved it and it had a good life :D

that was the ending?? :( that was so..sudden
noooo!! it cant end!

HEY, THOSE ARE MY TOTINOS.
Sorry, I had to say that.
Congrats lovely! It's hard to end a story, I know. I wrote the last of my Shaun and bawled my eyes out. They become family. And you never wanna let 'em go.
Aww, Scotty. <3
Loved it, really, I did. One of my favorite stories, ever.
Thanks for letting us on this awesome ride with you!
Much love!

Sad to see it end
D:

Wait...it's OVER? WHAT?!?!?

I think I may actually cry. I LOVED Florescent Adolescence, and this story, and oh. I'm sad now >.<

So I went by Cinnabon again last weekend and I finally found out why there wasn't any annoying squeaky Russian girl...
Wanna know why? She moved to Missouri. Lol! XD
I'm just kidding, I actually didn't see a girl.
But that last update was really sad...and I'm still trying to logically figure out how Candace had Jamerson with Scotty after having Hayden with Shaun, and then another one in the oven...also fathered by Shaun.

I should really start advertising another sequel to this so that you have to write one.
A lot can happen in 10 years...that we'd LOVE to know about!

I think I am crying more than you did. I love this story like a child! You can't end it! I am in love with it! :,,,(

Gosh, I'm so sorry that even the comment that I did leave before was so crappy, and probably had no insight whatsoever.
Believe me, I usually give better comments than that.
I feel kind of bad for Scotty that he's still tied to her in a way. I mean it must be difficult for him because it seemed like he really did love an care for her.
The ending felt complete, it didn't leave questions unanswered unlike other stories.
Wonderfully written story.
Peace and Love!

If my comment was one of the two I'm so sorry. I didnt want to make you feel like crap. I like the ending, even though it threw me completely off with Candace and Scotty had a kid. Definately didn't see that coming. You should do a Louie story, but with the Louie in this story, because we all know how much I love Louie. I knew Natalie was going to screw Shaun over! I am awesome! But, it's still sad the story has ended.

Dun dun dunnn, its the end..I guess I knew it was coming, but I didn't want it ): I was just remembering from the very first chapter, when she told Shaun she liked him, oh boy...

Anyways, that thing with Nat, hahaa. That was great. Didn't one of the boys know something was up with her and her skating partner? I don't know..whatever. So she moved..that was weird. But now Shaun is all happy happy with Candace, blah blahhh. I'm just glad you didn't make them go right into it you know? Shaun said he kinda just wanted his best friend back. Now that I'm re-reading your authors note, haha I kinda feel like a dick, for expecting what you were gotta put in the begining..heh heh..I guess you panicking and came up with his whole physco ex thing am I right? :P

Okay this whole "Ten Years Later" thing. She had two kids yes? One looked like Shaun and one Scotty..does that mean ones Scotty? Wtf, did she have a kid with Scotty AFTER Shaun??....Woww! I think you made all the Scotty lovers VERY fucking happy...Like Scotty a father? Awww, thats sweet. But I still wonder how he feels about Candace..having a child with her, is that really closure at all? :\

Aw poor Kevin and Danielle. I'm so happy their still together, now they were a power couple. Sad though what happened to Kevin..Holy crap Candace preggo again? (As you can tell I'm writing this as I read it haha, so I wouldn't forget anything :P) HOLY MOTHER. Aw then Scotty getting all defensive about his own kid :P That was cute. He seems like a cool dad. And Shaun haha, I'd die for red hair! But maybe not as ...bushy..hahaha.

Gah, there you go again! Making me and probley everyone else feel bad for Scotty ): He still loves Candace, and the whole child thing doesn't make it any easier for him to forget! Poor guy. I guess Candace too, she feel so sufficated. God, I loved how you ending this all, but WTF? She had a baby with Scotty AFTER Shaun? So she went back to Scotty for a night or what??? This is going to keep me wondering. I'm still confused about this sequal thing. Is their one or not? You said to look out for stories with these guys in them, do you mean Candace and them in general, or just the main guys in their own stories??? Man you probley could have went with this all the way up till she was twenty six, but you would have had to been a crazy ass writer to come up with all these shit idiots and what not.

It was good in the end, I'm pleased (Y)

"I couldn’t waste the precious time I had left to live with Shaun, living in this modern love."

I love this line. And this chapter made me really sad, but I'm glad he finally stopped being a turd. *sighs* Pandora needs to stop giving me sad music that syncs with the sad chapters I'm reading.

she is such a drama queen. she wants scotty to love her and not be mad when she crys about how much she loves shaun, and how mean he is to her. and she want shaun to her self. well candace you cant have all of that and the way youre acting youre gonna get none of it.
lovveddd the update :D

SHAUNS BACK SHAUNS BACK LALALALALALA! IM EEXXXCCCITTTTEEEDDDD! and if louie acts in his spinoff the way he does in this story id TOTALLY subscribe.

Uhhmm, the end was adorable, about the whole 'I still love you' thing.

I don't hate it, then again I love all your chapters.
I'm really anxious to see(er, read) what happens next.

LOUIE IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How I missed him more then anything. Like really, I think he's been about my favorite thing about this story..that and all the drama of course.

-- Louie couldn’t grow up. He was like Peter Pan.
--“I’ve been having a hard time masturbating to fictional characters,”
--“That’s only because I walked in on him listening to Enya, jacking off, and vomiting into a cup on his desk,”
--I had once walked in on Louie when he was jacking it. It was terrifying. He was the baby of the group; he wasn’t supposed to know where his own junk was.

Now, that was a heated argument between Candace and Scotty. Of course I feel bad for Scotty, I always have. I guess I can finally say that yes..Scotty is my favorite. I know its not sympathy anymore, it's just because he's an overall better person and better character in this story.(BESIDES LOUIE) Of course Scotty lied to make Candace feel better, shes a plan idiot to not know that. I really disliked Candace from the begining, this story was just freakin awesome, I couldn't stop reading it! Like holy balls, I love it. So much shit going on.

It's wasn't suprising that they came back early, and it's pretty obvious that Shaun broke up with Nat...I was expecting this. Now Shaun and Candace are gotta talk things out and together, blah blah blahhh blah blahhhh. Don't get me wrong about this comment, I love this story! It just kinda sucks how your going to make it end this way..I'm hoping you have something planned, but I'm kinda doubting it now.

I agree with some people on this sequal thing, but I know that won't happen, if not one contributes enough, with the whole idea thing. I know how much you had trouble with it. But this idea of a Louie story, I LOVE IT! If he's going to be like he is in this story RIGHT ON MAN! I don't know how that'd go about..since Louie doesn't seem like the center role kinda guy(in a story), BUT YEAH! Do it.

: D

Poor Scotty. :( I can't wait to see what happened over the vacation and see Shaun's reaction to his room.

And I'm listening to 'Free Falling' and then it changed to 'When I Come Around' by Green Day. it totally fits with this chapter... It made me really sad... Anyway...

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THE UPDATE. i love scotty so much :(

scotty update now? :P

There had better be another sequel to this. This is one of my favorite Shaun stories (and also the main cause of my Insomnia) and i don't want it ending anytime soon.
CANDACE MUST MOVE ON! (to Shaun...in the sequel).
Great update! Can't wait to find out why they came back early.
It's eating me away...