emma that's kinda looooooong but thanks dani :Di feel special, oh and emma I am awesome, but tbh you two are both more awesome then me xx love you both
March 13th, 2010 at 12:06pm
Second: I blatantly need to talk to you. Desperately. Because you are amazing and I miss you.
Third: This is going to fail miserably.
Now, onto the reviewing...
I don’t now. You missed out the k, here, I think.
you are my dork in tin foil I REMEMBER THIS LINE FROM YEARS AGO. Just thought I'd point out the awesomeness of that.
I’d dug myself a hole, jumped into and carried on digging. I really love the way you word things. Your descriptions are very... wow-inducing. Like, I'm getting the despair that you're feeling.
It’s always on the tip of my tongue, but I’ll never be strong enough to say it to you. The 'on the tip of my tongue' part reminds me of a Bring Me The Horizon lyric; I've got a secret: it's on the tip of my tongue, it's on the back of my lungs, and I'm gonna keep it. I know something you don't know. ANYWAYS, awesome points to you for that.
But that day isn’t today, and tomorrow isn’t looking good either. I don't know what it is about this line, but it sort of reminds me of Fall Out Boy lyrics. Which, obviously, means I fell in love instantly.
Or I replace the “l” with a “w”. I'm presuming this is supposed to say "we". If not, then I'm sorry but it makes no sense to me.
And that we’re never alone together. This is probably just me being picky, but I'm not sure if that 'that' really works in this sentence. It just feels ... out of place when I read it.
And if I can’t say when we’re alone, how can I say it when we are in a room full of your “friends”, some of whom I think are assholes or jerks or whatever I feel like calling them at the time. After the how can I part I was expecting a question mark at the end of the sentence. It wasn't there. That bugs me because I'm annoying like that.
I guess the best way is to tell you straight out. Like the person who knows told me too. So here goes: I love you. Um, wow. That's all I have to say.
You are an amazing writer. Your skills are way better than mine and now that Mibbs doesn't hate you, I'm expecting more wonderful pieces like this!
Finally, this Alex person sounds awesome. Like, so awesome that he pwns my ass. Which kinda sucks but I'm willing to let that pass this time. :)
I LOVE YOU!
