April 21st, 2010 at 11:40pm
Wow, this story is so dang awesome.
Usually I don't like stories set in a school theme, because they happen to be so cliche most of the time, but I loved this one. Mostly because it was in a college instead of a highschool as well. It was a nice change, and it has a different feel to it from most stories. Definitely unique.
It's almost like a mystery, and I felt like I had to read it all word for word to grasp what was happening, which can be a bad thing at times, but in this case it was completely awesome.
And the plot, oh my god, the plot. Is just awesome. I don't really know how to describe it, but your plot seems to be so detailed from the very beginning, as if there's nothing missing, and yet there's still enough gaps in the plot threads to keep you interested.
Truly, this was one of the best stories I've read on mibba in such a long time. I will definitely be subscribing and keeping up with you on this one. The way it all connects... is just brilliant. You can tell from the first chapter, or even just the summary, that this story has been well thought out, thought out to the extremes. I loved that about it.
You should be proud of this story, it's fantastic, and I'm glad I decided to check it out. <3
I'm subbing.
<3