May 16th, 2010 at 11:48pm
Can I just that I'm a loss for words at how amazing this one-shot is? Because I am.
Everything flowed so perfectly, from beginning to end.
I won't lie, I got a little teary-eyed, as I was listening to the song on repeat the whole way
Through reading. The beginning, showing the fight between her parents, was the perfect set-up
For the whole plot. I'm not going to lie: I was a little upset when Kennedy poured his heart out to her,
Nervously, and saw that she reacted negatively. I felt bad for the boy.
But when I read that she texted him, saying, 'You are the only exception', I felt relieved,
Even if I knew it was coming. It was the perfect way to fit that line in.
And the ending was amazing. I'm truly, truly loved this. I even wish it were a story,
So I could continue reading more. Lol. I loved this to pieces, Jaylee! (:
I haven't seen a true to the song song-fic that was this amazing before. I was almost crying when she called him.