I liked it, and I'm excited for an update! I got really good imagery out of it, what with the rainy, cloudy day in Chicago; and then Bren standing on a balcony smoking... And, I'm excited to see how you'll do the mpreg, because everyone does it differently. So yeah, looking forward to that XD Question: So, did he give up smoking? Because it's mentioned, but then he's standing there smoking. Uhhh...yeah. Maybe I'm just dumb :P Also, could you maybe make the font a little darker? It was a little hard to read....
Loved it, and I'm fer sure subscribing right now :-]]]]]]]]]]]
I got really good imagery out of it, what with the rainy, cloudy day in Chicago; and then Bren standing on a balcony smoking...
And, I'm excited to see how you'll do the mpreg, because everyone does it differently. So yeah, looking forward to that XD
Question: So, did he give up smoking? Because it's mentioned, but then he's standing there smoking. Uhhh...yeah. Maybe I'm just dumb :P
Also, could you maybe make the font a little darker? It was a little hard to read....
Loved it, and I'm fer sure subscribing right now :-]]]]]]]]]]]