Just To Be With You - Comments

“I would have to say that this is a creepy victory for you man. - - very good description!

Travis, I want to agree with you, I know it makes sense okay. But I love her, I love her so much more than I’ve ever loved anything or ever want to love anyone. It’s easy to say I could go find someone else and feel the same way about them but I know I won’t. - - Well I'm glad he realizes this. It's not time ti give up now!

“My guess is because if he opens his eyes to that then he’ll have to open his eyes to the fact that she’ll never love him back.” - - I want her with Zach, but Poor Marc.

“Hey Sar.” Travis was the last person I expected to see. - - me too honestly!

“I didn’t say that. I said you called him. There was no talking. In fact you called Zach while you were in the middle of having sex with your new boyfriend.” - - OK just a tad awkward.

I gotta say I really think Travis is a very good friend. That was a tough conversation he had.

t killed me to say it but if I was going to have sex with her I needed to know she wouldn’t regret it in the morning. If I wanted to earn her trust back, taking advantage of her in her drunken state would help neither one of us. As hard as it was to guide her into the bedroom and leave to sleep on the couch by myself, it was something I had to do. - - As much as I want them together, I'm very proud of Zach. I think he made the right decision.

This was a great chapter. I really feel like they are making progress. I hope Zach can get her away from booze. That can be a really really bad thing.

More please!

I'm in agreement with Travis... he needs to let her go. She's not the same person she was and clearly she can't let go and forgive what he's done. It's not fair for her drag along two people...

love the update as always...i'm glad zach hasn't given up on her yet...def. want them to get back together..i think Sarah should forgive him he's really trying and wants to gain the trust back..update soon hun!!

“Zach, how could you question that?” I didn’t understand. “It was horrible, it wasn’t enjoyable to me. That was no dream. That was a nightmare at its peak.”
“I wouldn’t call it that.” His voice was unfamiliar. OK that was creepy - good creepy, but creepy. Sean Avery - yeah!

Marc.” I panted his name, guilt oozing out of my mouth. I was lying next to him in his bed. Not Zach. Not Sean. - - As much as I love Marc, I think she just needs her Zach.

“I don’t know how he knows but he knows you’re sleeping with Marc.” She tried to hide it, but the way she looked at me screamed judgment. - - Maybe now she'll feel more like the score is even, like she is ready to forgive him.

“Yes…oh my God… yes…Oh Zach…Zach…” - - Man that's creepy too, him listening is totally creepy. Yet I get how he can't hang up. Her calling his name is creepy, but I'm so glad he heard it.

Man I can't imagine what a weird place Zach must be in right now. He heard her having sex with someone else, but she called his name. So twilight zone. I love it.

I'm dying to know how she ended up calling him. I can't wait until they end up talking about this. I don't see how they can't talk about it.

This was a serious cliffhanger. I want to know what happens next. More Please!

i am starting to feel really bad for Zach..i wanna see them back together...great update as always..update soon

I cannot wait for the next chapter !
My heart broke for Zach, poor thing ...

Other than Courtney telling her to get over the rape, I completely agree with her!
And whether Sarah was the one to call Zach, or Marc did it, that was low!
Can't wait to see what happens next!

i loved this chapter
i loved how zach was the one that was able to convince her to come out of the bathroom
honestly i dont feel bad for marc, he should have never tried to date her because clearly he is just the rebound
please update soon : )

Yeah I still fucking love her. Not only do I love her but I also fucking lost her and now she’s with him. I can sugar coat it all I want but at the end of the day we’re not together anymore, - - This makes me very sad, but also proud that he really gets this is his doing. He did this and he’s not blaming her which most guys would do.

“Yeah…,” he rubbed the back of his neck. “I’m going with Courtney, and uh, Marc’s going with Sar.” - - Man Travis is really stuck between a rock and a hard place. Sucks to be him.

This sick twisted game between Sarah and I was finished. - - Oh no – no giving up Mr. Parise!!!!

When Marc spotted me he immediately stood up straight and glared at me with ice-cold eyes. “What the fuck are you doing here?” he spit out as he made his way towards me. - - Oh man Marc must be raging. But Zach’s right. It’s what’s best for Sarah.

“We had a great time that day and we were both nervous about getting caught, but we trusted each other and you know it was pretty hot,” I smiled to myself as I thought back to that day. - - HAHAHA this made me laugh. Love this little addition.

“Simple. I want her to trust me, and I know I have to earn it. The fact is it takes time. I can’t just come here and coax her out of the bathroom in hopes of being the one to sleep next to her tonight, because if I did that, I’d be no better than Marc. I love her, and she needs to know I’m not just working her so that she’ll take me back.” - -Now that sounds like a plan!!!

This was an amazing chapter. I love Zach getting his confidence back and I love his plan. He belongs with Sara!

I do feel bad for Marc though. It must suck to watch your girl’s ex be able to help her when you can’t.

Such a good chapter!

I loved Zach in this chapter! <3
How can Sarah not know that he's so in love with her?!
She better wake up and realize it soon!

Zach definitely got his swagga back after that !
I hope Sarah realizes how good Zach is before she really goes downhill ...
I loved this chapter and I can't wait for more <3

I love love loved this chapter :) even though zach hurt her he is still a sweetheart :)

great update as always...i love that he was the only one who could get her to come out...gives them some new hope..i'm ready for her to ditch marc and give zach a chance...update soon hun!!

another amazing chapter<3
this sarah and marc thing needs to end asap, zach and sarah are just ment to be. shes needs to get over zach's issue and forgive him already! Zach goes out of his way to get her back and all shes doing is dangling marc around to make zach suffer more.

Marc needs to be traded far, far away!
Zach may have slept with someone else first but he was drunk, hurt and he only did it once. Sarah is continuously doing it and then practically parading Marc around right in front of Zach. I can't stand Sarah right now.

Loved the update..i think Zach and Sarah should get back together ASAP please..i know maybe he deserved it a little because he cheated but he really is trying gotta give him that...update soon !!!

I really don't like Marc. Zach and Sarah should get back together ASAP !
I know what Zach did was stupid, but everyone makes mistakes and he certainly regrets it. So I hope she can forgive him soon.
Loved the update and I can't wait for more !

Ch - 18
It should be us…, Z - - so true Zach!

“We look like ourselves,” he had said. “Happy and blind to anything else but each other.” - - awww I miss that.

My rationing of why was because he wanted to keep tabs on Zach. - - I’m not sure that’s really a bad thing, at least from his POV. He just loves her.

“When is Marc getting here?” As soon as Trav asked me that I immediately flickered my eyes past him and to Zach who looked like the air had just been sucked out of his tires. - - I have to give her credit – sticking to her guns. How can she stand to make him so unhappy. I don’t even know the man and it kills me to think of him so heartbroken.

“No you dick. Sarah…she’s… fucking Marc.” I forced the words out. The realization of that was harder to hear from my mouth than I anticipated. “Shit…I’m going to fucking puke. - - OMG I feel so bad for him. Not that he doesn’t deserve it, but he just loves her so much.

I watched in shock as Marc wrapped his arm around her waist and she killed another glass of wine. I wasn’t the only man who’d ever had all of her anymore. I was never prepared to have to accept that. - - heart breaks.

And still I love Marc. I know. I just feel even worse for him, cuz in the end he’s the one that loses everything. It’s just sad.

I really loved this update. I’m not sure how much of this Zach is going to be able to take. And I think she has to break things off with Marc soon. He’s so attached. What a mess. Nothing is as it should be. Still I love the drama and the angst.

Ch – 17

Poor Sarah. I so can’t judge her for sleeping with Marc. She needed to feel love and she went to someone she trusts. People do things in the moment that they later regret, and she will regret sleeping with Marc.

As for him being good in bed. – well he is a Staal. hehehe

He sensibly thought I was already asleep and as he exhaled as he kissed the top of my head, “I love you,” he breathed out in his slumber. - - poor Marc.

“Tell me you love me first.” He almost stumbled over once more but I held him up.
“Zach come on.”
“Just say it Sarah.”
I looked down at my feet and finally back up into his eyes. “I love you.” - - she so does. At least she doesn’t deny it.

I’m so torn about Sarah. On one hand I feel for her. I know how it feels to be heartbroken and do stupid things because of it. I really do feel sorry for her. On the other hand, she really is using Marc. Especially now that he told her he loves her. She can’t deny knowing how much he feels for her. I hope she handles that well. And I feel bad for Zach. He did a terrible evil thing. But… I still feel bad for him.

I loove this story!! Her and Zach need to be back together noooow! Can't wait for another update!