The story is good but I see the same mistakes as Ms. Sobriety saw. I'll be glad to help with editing your stuff. I mean add detail to it so that you don't have to rewrite everything you may just need to help me with a few minor things like what she is actually feeling and what the charactors look like and who they are. You know more backround information on them.
March 24th, 2010 at 04:33am