April 8th, 2010 at 08:57pm
Wow, Jules, this was awesome! It was really cute and an all around great story. And you know I'm a sucker for guys with dark brown hair and blue eyes...
I'm going to send you a longer, more detailed review for the contest soon. I'll give you a score out of one hundred from a rubric that I made, but you won't get to see that. It'll just help me decide who the winner is.
Really, I absolutely adored this story! Amazing job!
Ah, I smell an opportunity to imagine this cute love story... [*insert evil laugh here* ... umm... why did it came out as a snort? brain's fuction low at the moment ..hm, guess that what happens when you're tired... man, how am i going to do the HUGE step from my desk to the bed? seems like such a compilcated task.. if right foot is going forward, then what left foot's soppose to do????]
Well, i hope you'll win the contest...
Keep it up! <3