May 15th, 2010 at 01:36pm
First of all, I loved the way this was written. I loved how it showed both sides of the conflict, so to speak. I absolutely adored this sentence: “It wasn’t about you.” Ryan snapped, turning around, slightly hurt. I think it gave quite an interesting effect, to demonstrate, for lack of better term, that it did have nothing to do with Brendon.
I liked how this also included a first-hand demonstration of this particular fetish. It was very well written, and of course Rydon is always a plus. Thank you for entering my contest and congratulations.
I love the way this was written, though I love the way you write in general. There's always a very cynical/dark edge to your material, yet there's not always indefinite doubt of, for lack of a better phrase, a "happy" ending.
Either way, you remind me of why I love Mibba so much, in all its OTP glory... I have to stop using bandom slang. Anyway, have a nice Saturday!