I'm not familiar with this fandom, so I read it as an original fiction. I was a bit unsure if starting the story right off with a smutty chapter was a good idea, but in the end it was because it explained the key part of Dick and Billy's relationship. So kudos to you for giving it a meaning. You've got a really nice style of writing; it flows well and is detailed with a balance. Keep up the great work, man.
So much detail. I've never really read anything like this, but it's really interesting. I love the emotion you put with it. It's weird seeing a story involved with so much sex and sad emotion. But, you defiantly had me sold near the end with Dick's death. So much love between the two. I wish there were more to this. <3
I'm not familiar with this fandom, so I read it as an original fiction. I was a bit unsure if starting the story right off with a smutty chapter was a good idea, but in the end it was because it explained the key part of Dick and Billy's relationship. So kudos to you for giving it a meaning. You've got a really nice style of writing; it flows well and is detailed with a balance. Keep up the great work, man.