Drowning Lessons - Comments

  • vaticann

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    I'm crying so much
    February 3rd, 2012 at 10:56pm
  • Writing is my Life

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    I can't believe it, that was sad. I'm like cryin on the insdie, and laughing at the same time, its just soo true of how ppl can get like that, I loved it!
    April 26th, 2011 at 04:29am
  • Beast In Repose

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    Thank you. I seriously need a beta, I went over this after the first host told me about errors and I was sure I fixed them. Though I don't usually agree with beta's XD They always change my quotation marks from ' to ". I shall see what I can do, but thank you
    March 22nd, 2011 at 07:27am
  • yodailicous

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    That was pretty great. It confused me pretty bad at first but as I read along I understood it more. Besides some of the grammar it was all and all amazing. It was sad [Which was the main criteria of the contest] and I'm fascinated by suicide. So yeah I really liked this. It was pretty moving.
    March 21st, 2011 at 09:42pm
  • Beast In Repose

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    Oh wow. I'm glad I'm your first commentee...but a sequel? Hmmm...idk, it's been a long time since I actually wrote this :/ I usually just repost for effect. Maybe, I'll have to see how I go. But if I do, I will comment your page.
    September 23rd, 2010 at 01:44am
  • High-Rise Estate

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    oh gosh.
    this is this first story i've commented on, cos that was beautiful. i fucking cried.
    right a sequel? *drops to knees and begs*
    September 22nd, 2010 at 03:01pm
  • honeyjoons

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    Wow.
    That was amazing.
    It was so sad.
    I loved it.
    July 23rd, 2010 at 03:03am
  • tigermilk

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    :o

    WOW
    July 8th, 2010 at 03:10am
  • Beast In Repose

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    Haha, thank you, I really appreciate the story. It makes me feel achieved that I can make people cry. I hold a slightly creepy pride to myself in that sense.
    June 29th, 2010 at 06:51am
  • coastofharry.

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    I cried, I usaully don't get all sappy either.
    When Frank said he rigged the car, I broke down and cried!
    I really liked reading this (:
    June 29th, 2010 at 06:21am
  • Farce.

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    Judging has begun! The title was very unique and interesting. The story was hard to follow because of lack of use of grammatical markings. I like your phrases, i.e. “Oh, now isn’t that rich!” There were some misused words such as ‘your and you’re’. Overall, this story could have been brilliant because all the makings of a good story were there. The grammar was not up to par. The imagery was breathtaking and great! The story was enjoyable. I hope you correct it and repost it!
    June 26th, 2010 at 03:37am
  • Beast In Repose

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    XP. To Frank, none of that mattered at all to him. Gerard was the only thing that really mattered to him; I can relate.
    June 22nd, 2010 at 08:15am
  • Annalia

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    Very well written... I just hate it when people give up >.<
    How could he scar Gerard like that?
    Even if Gerard DIDN'T love him like he feared, it would still make him feel awful for causing that.
    I could understand Gerard's side of things and his reasons and his thoughts, but Frank is crazy to me.
    June 21st, 2010 at 10:37am
  • ghostbrainz.

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    Wow, that was really fantastic.
    I almost cried. And the ending was just, wow.
    Great job. (:
    June 14th, 2010 at 02:40am
  • Patty Lovell

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    This made me cry.
    It's beautfully written.
    June 14th, 2010 at 01:14am
  • sexualbull

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    That was actually really sad. I cried for the first time in a while, reading that. It was very good, though.
    May 30th, 2010 at 12:36am
  • Beast In Repose

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    Thank you. It gets me every time I read it too :(
    May 19th, 2010 at 09:07am
  • livingfortheweekend.

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    i loved this so much. i'm crying right now.
    May 18th, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • Beast In Repose

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    :) Thank you. And love the misfits!
    April 4th, 2010 at 01:50am
  • Venganza

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    God damn. That was amazing. I love how it went back and forth between them... Just wow. That was so perfect.
    April 3rd, 2010 at 02:22pm