Very well written. I really appreciate you joining my contest. Very few errors, but that might have been just because you re-read it too much, but I understand. Overall, you did really well, and I love how you followed Lady GaGa's song so well, adding pieces of the lyrics to your story made it all the more appealing. Oh, by the way, good job in creating Juliet. She is a very interesting character.
I really enjoyed you entry, good luck, and again, thank you so much for joining my contest. (:
Very few errors, but that might have been just because you re-read it too much, but I understand.
Overall, you did really well, and I love how you followed Lady GaGa's song so well, adding pieces of the lyrics to your story made it all the more appealing. Oh, by the way, good job in creating Juliet. She is a very interesting character.
I really enjoyed you entry, good luck, and again, thank you so much for joining my contest. (: