Eyes of the Devil - Comments

Okay, I made it to Chapter 10 and I give up. I tried following the plot line but my attention span is long gone. Great writing style, love your description of MCR, but I'm lost. . .

This is the most confusing story i've ever read...

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The Devil got landed with a shitty job, he has to deal with assholes everyday, he's probably bored as hell.
-Gerard

Sorry, but this made me laugh.

happy?

The end? That's IT?
Okay, so I didn't lie when I said I'd get around to commenting. I just had some hellish finals and papers to get through first. So here's my comment.
Okay, it was an awesome story. Just enough confusion to pique my interest... awesome. I'm still a little... I dunno... that you made Gerard the Devil... but it was awesome. And Bob... Bob was my favorite. What I'm trying to say is, contratulations. That was one hell of a ride you took us on.

I cannot believe it, Rex.
Every fucking time you outdo yourself and every time you make me wish your stories never ended.

Flu Rescent:

I think that was probably the perfect place to end it, before it started getting into the messy details of Hell, and Gerard's comeuppance. The rest of the plot is up the reader, I suppose.

One of your most special, outlandish stories yet. And I know you have good stuff in store for the future, but it's still upsetting to see this particular story finish. Kudos, kudos. ♥

I have to say that that pretty much sums up everything I could say about the fact that the story is ending. It was an epic journey, and i remember the beginning when you were just telling me about it and I thought you were psycho.

And then there was RP, which was one of the only reasons you thought of the wicked cool Ande. [Although, after our Yahoo! conversations, I don't like him as much as I used to. roflmao.]

But this was a brilliant place to stop it, and your use of words was amazing. You have an awesome vocabulary.

Oh, and when I was reading the part about the 'much-needed hug', all I could think about was you asking "Would it be too weird for them to hug?"

In the way you made it, no, not at all.

I think my favorite part though was when they were in between and there were mirrors on the floor and ceiling but their reflections were in one or the other. Like I've said before, your imagery is amazing.

You, my friend, are fucking amazing.

I'm sad it had to come to an end, but at the same time, I'm happy I got to read through such an amazing story.

Oh, and just so you know, I was playing Halo with my brother and I found a Needler gun and yelled "OH MY LYN! FRANK!!!" and got stares from about five of my brother's friends. XP thaaaaanks.

lol.
I loved it. You were genius, as always.

Wow. Just wow. I can't even... wow. My mind is just... Gosh, that was amazing. Wow. Awesome. I loved the detail, and... wow.

I... don't even know what to say. Jesus.

I think that was probably the perfect place to end it, before it started getting into the messy details of Hell, and Gerard's comeuppance. The rest of the plot is up the reader, I suppose.

One of your most special, outlandish stories yet. And I know you have good stuff in store for the future, but it's still upsetting to see this particular story finish. Kudos, kudos. ♥

IT WAS THE LAST CHAPTER!!!
NOO!!!
...
I still LOVED IT THOUGH!!!!
Now they'll both finally be happy in the place that they belong!
:arms: FOR YOU!!!!
I LOVED IT!!!!

So Hayley-x-Bailey recommended that I read this. :D

I thought it was... wow. The plot was totally original. Your vocabulary was absolutely... just... breathtaking. I loved it. All of it.

And I think I rushed through it, because I didn't get some things... oh well. I should leave a better comment when I re-read the whole thing again. ^_^

Okay, so what is there to say?
You've just managed to shock the hell out of me, make me laugh, bring me close to tears and you've made me do this: :omfg:

all in one story.

The way this was written was just amazingly flawless. Confusing at times, but I'm just slow. The way everything was explained in the end just made the entire story make sense. The way you describe things is just... wow. The words you write just paint a perfect picture in my head. This story is easy to visualize.

The characters in the story just seem so real. Individuals with very distinct personalities. And the way you get into Gerard's head just made the story more wonderful.

“My son would say you’re being a sillyface to worry about the future."
I can't believe you actually took the dare and included that.

It made my day.

It's sad that this is the last chapter, because now what will I look forward to?

You better hurry up and write something else before you're readers go insane, Rex.

xox
Hayley

I LOVE you!

That was amazing.

You=Genius.

It's over though =[. Ah well, it's so good.

♥

You know, it's not that hard to imagine Gerard as the devil.
And I must say for some strange reason the last paragraph made my eyes water.
Very VERY good. I applaude you!

Okay, WOW.

I think I had to reread that at least...345 times before I got that.

But that's just me.

Was amazing, as always.

You knew I was going to say that, didn't you?

rachael.romantic:

i'd like to start by stating the following:
holy motherfucking hell, rex.

...okay i'm done.

this chapter was absolutely one of the most morbidly beautiful things i think i might have ever read.
it made me want to cry.(but then most of your stories do.)He gripped Bob by the wings and, to Gerard's horror, tore them off with the sickening crunch of bone and ripping flesh. The blond man screamed and stumbled away from Ray and the rotating funnel, but once he set foot on the stormy-looking clouds, he fell through them like a lead weight and disappeared.

i'm almost 100% positive that was my favorite part of the whole chapter. i could just see it so vividly.
your use of imagery was flawless, it was like watching a movie in my head.
the plot alone is fascinating and you're the only one on this whole site that could pull it off.
sheer brilliance.

did i mention how fucking amazing you are?

TOTALLY AGREE!

You are just... wow. You never cease to amaze me.

Rachael.romantic was right, the imagery was so vivid and... wow.

You are so good! I love this story. :hug:

... :mrgreen:

i'd like to start by stating the following:
holy motherfucking hell, rex.

...okay i'm done.

this chapter was absolutely one of the most morbidly beautiful things i think i might have ever read.
it made me want to cry.(but then most of your stories do.)He gripped Bob by the wings and, to Gerard's horror, tore them off with the sickening crunch of bone and ripping flesh. The blond man screamed and stumbled away from Ray and the rotating funnel, but once he set foot on the stormy-looking clouds, he fell through them like a lead weight and disappeared.

i'm almost 100% positive that was my favorite part of the whole chapter. i could just see it so vividly.
your use of imagery was flawless, it was like watching a movie in my head.
the plot alone is fascinating and you're the only one on this whole site that could pull it off.
sheer brilliance.

did i mention how fucking amazing you are?

wow....
HOLY FUCK!!!
This all makes sense now...
How Bob is on Earth, and how Gerard is the devil....
Scary.....
It'll get better... right?
anywho!
I LOVE IT!!
more please!!

So Gerard's like travelling into Bob's memory? After Bob showed him how he died? Hmm this story keeps me thinking. I love it :]

HolyBobFrankandMikey. This story NEVER ceases to amaze me. It's just WOW.

-haute couture

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooh.

I love it! That is SO cool!