June 18th, 2011 at 11:01pm
Everyone who are lucky/unlucky enough to have siblings will recognize themselves in this text. I sure did!
It was wonderful to read and I found myself smiling like a fool half of the time. Good job!
This story made me remember my childhood when the smallest things would grow out of proportion and I'd get mad.
I really liked this! It was so cute! I like how Ciara felt left-out and such when Beryl came...it was how most older siblings would feel, I would imagine. I like how you called the shopping thing "malling". I also liked how Ciara mistaked the "S" thing for mispelling Ciara. That was hilarious, and it made me laugh! I felt it amusing when Beryl loved the relationship she had with Ciara, but Ciara didn't want anything to do with it. It was an interesting twist and I loved it. :)