The Disease Called Men - Comments

First chapter:
First, I love Cerise. Her character is full of wit and charm and I really like that even though she is school president, she is still a bit rowdy in the classroom. Definitely not the cliche bookworm I was expecting. I love how realistic this is, like it was just a normal school day when bam, a rumor his that boys are going to be joining them.

Second chapter:
Cerise is such a drama queen, I love her lol. I love that this story is in first person, getting to read how she feels, what she’s thinking, it’s perfect for this story. I think the father-daughter relationship is so funny, like it’s a typical overprotective father with a scheming daughter. I love that you have little subplots, like Sarah’s surprise party, within the story. Like it’s already chapter two and still no boys because there are other things that are important. It’s great really!

Hello! The first thing I want to immediately throw out is that the layout is gorgeous and caught my eye immediately. I've read through the summary and the first chapter so far and my only real problem is that the summary is a bit too cluttered? It's really just personal preference as my eyes just struggle to focus on all the text. The story itself though is clear, but a little confusing since I didn't fully understand what was going on and what the issue with men is. I'm definitely going to keep reading though because I assume that my confusions are surely cleared up later in the story and I just haven't gotten there yet :)

I AM SO GLAD THIS IS STILL HAPPENING! (Please don't disappear again for 4 years.) I love Cerise and I'm so glad we may possibly get to see more of her. Time to reread this and enjoy it once again with one more chapter.

I am half shocked and half elated with this update! I really wasn't expecting it to be updated (sorry I gave up on you!) but I was hoping there would be an update and here it was!!! Haha, I just scrolled down through the comments to find that I had a similar comment about a year ago six comments back. :) (I don't even know if that sentence makes sense, but it seems that I am dedicated to your story - which is unusual since I don't even use mibba anymore - I'm on Team Wattpad!) Anyway, I love your update and please please update soon. Also, if you ever feel tempted to join the dark side (by that I mean Wattpad), please do. I can see your story being on the most popular list and I hear that there are a lot of people who get publishing deals. With your grammar, spelling and general correct-ness, I can definitely see that happening. Keep up the awesome work. You are so funny and I love your style of writing.

this is so different from anything i've read on this site, it's quite refreshing! I really love the layout and the way you have a glossary at the beginning and how the pronunciation is sometimes not the word Best friends (pronounced seh-rah, joo-lee-ah, lee-min) ect. i loved that and thought it was clever and funny. i always love reading humor in stories because i literally suck when i try to write humor, so kudos and hats off to you for being awesome. can't wait to read more, you've got a great and original idea going here.

This story is wonderful! You've managed to get the perfect amount of humor in there, but not so much that it just becomes stupid. Your characters are brilliant too, I love how you've developed them. Your layout is lovely, and the picture in its self interested me before I even started to read your actual story. I can't wait to read more. Excellent work here!

Oh my God, this story is hysterical. I absolutely adore Cerise and her craziness, and she keeps me in absolute stitches as I read. Her dynamic with the other characters is also incredibly witty and smart, and you do a great job about keeping the dialogue true to real teenage speech.

The lists at the beginning of the chapters are really awesome, and I love the little side thoughts that come from Cerise's narration throughout the story. Overall, the writing and characterization are great, and I can't wait to read more updates for this!

this story is like i've never seen on here. it's very clean and cut to perfection, as if you are reading it out of a grammar book. The characters are floating faces, which i enjoy believing thoroughly. The layout is beautiful and the picture that you used for it is quite an interesting piece in and of itself. It makes me ask questions as to what the story could be about. the story is wonderful written, keep on doing it dear!

I love how you start your every chapter, it’s original and funny.
The writing style is also very fitting for the Grammar school.
The main character has a great personality, I imagine her to be very quirky.
However I am really devastated that you finished the chapter in such an interesting place. Please hurry up and update.

Yesss!!! I'm so glad that you're back! :D I just so happened to remember the title of this epic tale and mibba-googled it to find out that you'd updated...two months ago! Just imagine how ecstatic I am and then triple it. I look forward to reading more! :)

You know your characters so well, I love them! You're a great writer :)

I'm so glad you've updated! now excuse me for going back to re-read before I read the next chapter haha, thankyou!

Oh wow, I've only read the first chapter but this is so funny! *applause*

I love everyhting about your story, I can't stop reading, I've re-read it even, clearly my life is very interesting haha, amazing writer, you care about all your characters not just the mains, can't wait for more! <3

I love the format in which you are writing this story. I know you havent updated it for a while, but I truly love how you write, it´s specian, not everyone can write that way. Please keep doing it. I laugh with Cerise´s thoughts and personality, she´s so weird but in a fun way. And I wanna know what´s up with Nikko, will they be together? I bet they will, I hope they will. And why does she hate boys so much, I mean, one things is not to like them, but another is to feel disguted by them at the age of sixteen and seventeen. Ugh, it´s a bit weird.

This is the most hilarious thing i have read in awhile, its soo funny i love Cerise's personality, i also love nikko, he's sneaky! I kinda wanna see some more naveen! I'm excited for more i hope you upadte soon. :)

You will never truly know how much I adore you for writing this. Now I can defend myself upon spaztically bursting out into laughterwhile staring at the computer screen. It's become somewhat of a habit, but my friends do try to understand, and that's all that matters. Anywho, please do continue this because it makes me oh so happy to read. Not to mention, Cerise is someone I can relate to, as I often blurt nonsense and crack immature jokes that no one but me really understand.

I genuinely love the way you write. Your style is so original, the humour is so unique and Cerise seems to be one of those people who really doesn't understand how weird she is which makes it even funnier. I love this story the best in comparison to your other ones (though they're good too). Keep it up. :D I can't wait for the next chapters...like literally, it's killing me so much that I'm re-reading all he previous chapters to keep me occupied and I always feel like a crazy psycho as I chuckle at my laptop even though I have read the joke before.
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Haha I love your summary page! Reminds me of urbandictionary.com :D

I want to kill Cerise but I also want to take along a box of popcorn and watch her antics. She must be very entertaining to watch. :D I'd pay to watch her, seriously.