It was great. The storyline flowed smoothly and I couldn't spot a single grammer mistake. The ending was interesting. I was about to groan when you sadi hwe woke up, but I guess it wasn't too cliche in the way you put it. Better than him getting his sex and nothing else. Good work :)
The ending was interesting. I was about to groan when you sadi hwe woke up, but I guess it wasn't too cliche in the way you put it. Better than him getting his sex and nothing else.
Good work :)