It was cute, it used my quote in a very amusing way, things had structure and flow, and were written VERRRRRRY well. No mistakes jumped out at me, so you're good on that front.
I will say I think it was a tad cliche at the end, but hey. Happy endings. And you know, sometimes a cliche is good to see, with everyone so worried about NOT using them.
I liked this a lot. Very well done. -Kota
April 1st, 2010 at 04:11am
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It was cute, it used my quote in a very amusing way, things had structure and flow, and were written VERRRRRRY well. No mistakes jumped out at me, so you're good on that front.
I will say I think it was a tad cliche at the end, but hey. Happy endings. And you know, sometimes a cliche is good to see, with everyone so worried about NOT using them.
I liked this a lot. Very well done.
-Kota