Oh wow, that was...incredible. Really. The lyrics are what really did it for me, in your Author's Note. They tied in perfectly with your letter and really added emotion to it, and I'm embarrassed to say I was fighting back tears.
First of all, I have to say that in the summary, the way you explained about the song and added the lyrics in there really opened up the story for me, before I even began to read it. It's very touching that your title has such a meaning, and it's really great that you thought about it and tied it in.
Why. Your opening word and paragraph was incredible. You started off the letter dramatically and powerfully, and gave me insight on how you were feeling, all in one word. It was one of the best starts to a story I've ever seen, so well done.
I love the way you incorporated many memories in there, it really made the letter more personal and emotional. Your writing is very sad and solemn, really portraying your emotions with your words, which is very hard to do.
It was an honor to know you. Short, sentimental and incredibly powerful. The way you added that in there, halfway through your letter was really incredible. Your short sentences get your emotions across as well as well as personifying the letter, so that was really good.
We love you Gilly. Forever loved, never forgotten. A beautiful ending. Once again, short and powerful, and amazingly emotional.
Thank you so much for sharing this with me. You put a lot of emotion and personal effects into the story, which I know must have been hard to write. It was really well written, so well done! I hope it helped to give you some closure.
First of all, I have to say that in the summary, the way you explained about the song and added the lyrics in there really opened up the story for me, before I even began to read it. It's very touching that your title has such a meaning, and it's really great that you thought about it and tied it in.
Why. Your opening word and paragraph was incredible. You started off the letter dramatically and powerfully, and gave me insight on how you were feeling, all in one word. It was one of the best starts to a story I've ever seen, so well done.
I love the way you incorporated many memories in there, it really made the letter more personal and emotional. Your writing is very sad and solemn, really portraying your emotions with your words, which is very hard to do.
It was an honor to know you. Short, sentimental and incredibly powerful. The way you added that in there, halfway through your letter was really incredible. Your short sentences get your emotions across as well as well as personifying the letter, so that was really good.
We love you Gilly. Forever loved, never forgotten. A beautiful ending. Once again, short and powerful, and amazingly emotional.
Thank you so much for sharing this with me. You put a lot of emotion and personal effects into the story, which I know must have been hard to write. It was really well written, so well done! I hope it helped to give you some closure.
Best of luck!