Bitch. - Comments

The summary was really different than the actualy story, I think. The summary sounded more like Andy was a criminal and Eric was a victim. But the story was a lot better than I thought out of summary. I was grinning/giggling the whole time I read it:D

"They're all based on sex," Andreas sighed as if it was a story he'd told a thousand times. "Skinny likes them thin-"
"I once dated an anorexic model."
Andreas glared again and continued. "With Bone, he likes to break them. Nightmare is an absolute nightmare to fuck - unless you're into that sort of thing, of course - and I... well."
"Sticks and stones may break his bones, but whips and chains excite him," Skinny said, his face totally straight for a moment before he burst into a fit of laughter.
I wonder if that's how they really got their names...

I really agree with Jess about the sex scene, you followed through with the personality all the way in stead of turning Eric into a whore;P

And I can see the guys's grins and smirks at the end so much.

Great job babe, amazing story!

Firstly the banner is gorgeous.

This was really, really good. And I'm not just saying that! :D It made me engrossed an the dialouge was perfectly as you could really see the connection between Eric and Andreas. I also felt for Eric as he seemed so awkward, especially when he kept being called 'Princess' bless him.

I think you handled the sex scene really well, you didn't make it too...forceful but neither did you break eric's character and have him suddenly just be like "yay fuck me!"

& the end was brilliant! :D I loved it well, well done. :)

This is perfect. I haven't read a DS fic that would capture me this much for ages. It's just... the kind that made me glued to the screen and, yeah. Perfect.

I love the banner, it fits so much.

The fic. From the summary I thought it was going to be more serial killers, but it wasn't, and you still used your recent obsession, eh? I love how non-cliche you made it, and yet it wasn't disgusting. Prison fics can end up so horrible, in my opinion, but you made it realistic and not cliche and it just worked. You know? It worked so fucking well. I love the bit about their usernames, too, it fitted so nicely in there, and the part about Kitten's roommate, just a bit of unrelated thing that added to the whole atmosphere.

And the sex, well. It's all I can say, I just could see it all so clearly and. Purr. That's all I will say.

Great job, honey!