So I promised to comment like... forever ago. I'm sorry I hadn't gotten around to this sooner. Anyways... I really liked this! It was so adorable! However, there were a couple typos and there was this one spot where you switched from third person to first person. But still, this story was oh so cute, and I'm glad you ended it happily instead of with them getting in some sort of fight or whatever. Gah... I'm a sucker for fluff :]
Anyways... I really liked this! It was so adorable!
However, there were a couple typos and there was this one spot where you switched from third person to first person.
But still, this story was oh so cute, and I'm glad you ended it happily instead of with them getting in some sort of fight or whatever.
Gah... I'm a sucker for fluff :]