You Wanna Ride White Lightning? - Comments

I cried while reading this. :'[ It's really heartfelt...and it makes me really miss Steve.
Really well written! Even though it's sad, you can just see all the emotion and honesty in your words, and in a way, it makes it cute.
I love the style you wrote it in, too. Like you were sitting there with him, just talking to him straight to his face; almost like you were kind of embarrassed that you were saying all that crazy stuff but still saying it nonetheless, because you really wanted him to know deep down how much he's worth. It was really nice.
I love this a lot. And you. And Steve.<3

I hate you.
You made me cry.
=(
I have a solo by him on my computer.
I played it just for this. I feel like a loser.
But still I was crying as I read this.
You talk about him like he's your hero, which he probably is.
it was really well written and I like that you talk to him as though you knew him.
But still you made me cry

I just want to start off by saying that this letter was really well written. Although I'm not incredibly familiar with Steven Clark, your writing really made me connect to both him, and in a way, you.

You familiarise with him, and that's what really makes your writing incredible. You talk to him like you know him, or knew him, and that adds so much identity and emotion to your story.

It said that you were just broken and in need of a friend. I’d like to think I could have been that friend. Those sentences were amazing. It shows me how you feel about him, and I think in a way you are his friend. You seem to know him so well and although you've never met, I think you can really connect to him in a way a friend would.

This whole letter was amazing. It was incredibly well written and emotional, and it was very personal, as if you were talking to him yourself. Well done. Every word was brilliant, and overall the whole story was beautiful. I know what it's like to lose an idol and it's honestly a lot harder than a lot of people would think, so thank you for entering. Good luck!