April 6th, 2010 at 10:32pm
Oh love, you know that I love this story, it’s just such material and it’s just great. Kitten in girl underwear and angry sex might be second most perfect pwp mix ever (first would be crying Kitten in girl underwear, obviously xD )
I love that Kitten gets so pissed ‘cause Andy is home too early and ruin the surprise (though I do believe it’s mostly for show, each he have to know Andy’s love for angry sex ^^ ). It could easily have been exaggerated that he gets angry on that level for Andy being home too early, but you’re pulling it off so well, and just makes it oddly hot.
I like the description of the outfit, it sounds like something he would fit veryyyy well in, and even pull off too – though admittedly the thought of a erection seen through satin panties irks me a little xD
One thing I have to point out, you wrote Andreas could see the few inches of thin air between the boy’s bare feet and the wooden floor, and then in another part you’re writing that he’s already wearing one of the knee high socks, so I’d take away the ‘bare’ part, or change it some other way.
Eric managed to hit Andreas on the arm and moan out loud at the same time
This made me giggle way too hard, of course Kitten will moan and hit Andy at the same time xD Also the part of him kissing and hitting Andy makes me giggle as well as the part where Andy carries him to the bed and starts fingering him and he’s still hitting on Andy xDDD
Oh Kitten, you’re so lucky you’re pretty xD
All in all, it’s a great story, and now I’ll go back and re-read it again
<3
I don't want to imagine any guy in satin girl underwear, but other than that.. perfect! *licks lips*