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  • KMRuvalcaba

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    Really love this so far, you've got an amazing way of writing, and i'm really interesting to see the histroy between Eric and Evalia! Can't wait to see what you have planed!

    -Kassandra
    October 16th, 2010 at 08:45am
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    Very beautiful, I can't wait to find out more about Evalia. I hope you update soon!
    September 12th, 2010 at 09:23am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    PLEASE UPDATE! :D
    August 19th, 2010 at 08:35am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    awww thats so cute
    UPDATE!
    please :]
    July 31st, 2010 at 08:05pm
  • Flux

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    You write beautifully :)
    June 15th, 2010 at 04:09am
  • MamiEI4U

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    I do like it so far! So happy to have more Eric stories!!!
    May 22nd, 2010 at 07:23am
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    I do like it so far! So happy to have more Eric stories!!!
    May 22nd, 2010 at 07:23am
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    i must say that you portrayed Sophie-Anne and Eric very well. great so far, looking forward to the next installment
    April 11th, 2010 at 09:42am
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    I agree that there arn't many eric northman fan fics, and of the few that there are, the chapters come very slowly. I'm looking forward to reading more of yours, its really good
    April 10th, 2010 at 11:31pm
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    Great story! I guess you're a fan of the show?! I can't wait for season 3!
    April 10th, 2010 at 11:20pm
  • callisto

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    I'm aware that this is a fan-fiction, but i'm not really sure if it's just pure eric northam fan-fiction, or if it's also based on true blood, because I don't watch it, so i hope i give a good review!

    The Layout: It's gorgeous! i love pretty layouts, and that's usually what draws me in to a story, other than the plot, haha. I love the image you chose for the banner/layout. Also, the font was readable, so I'm in love with this layout :D

    The Summary: the Fellowship of the Sun was behind this That caught my attention, i wonder who they are? Also, i love the name Sookie, it's very uncommon (for me at least) and it's cute. The summary was nice, it gave the background info without giving away too much.

    Prologue: Sophie-Anne, the Queen of Louisiana, appeared in the middle of the foyer wearing a sleek, floor length black dress with a plunging neckline and slits up the sides revealing the sides of a red thong. Her red hair was in perfectly coifed ringlets on her shoulders. She was beautiful and pale as milk, with reddish brown hair, large and tilted blue eyes. She was an elegant woman; around five foot two, always groomed down to the last eyelash.

    I loved the description you have of Sophie-Anne, the words you used really painted a picture in my head, which i like, because i want to get a visual of what the characters look like.

    The foyer opens up to a round room with glass marble floors and a grand staircase.
    since the story is written mostly in past tense, i think it would flow nice with the story if you put opened instead of opens? but that could be just me.

    Her hair was gold like the pollen inside a rockrose. Her eyes were the most enthralling shade of blue similar to the forget-me-nots in Sookie's backyard. Unlike most vampires, her skin was a pretty sun-kissed shade. She looked like the Disney Princess from Sleeping Beauty.

    Again, I love your descriptions, I love how you put time into describing the character's appearence. I think it's just as important as describing the scenery, because to me, it makes the character seem more believble

    Sookie goes to shake Evelia's outstretched hand. I'm not sure if you meant it to be written like that, but as I mentioned before, i think it would flow better with went instead of goes?

    "And you want to what? Go up against the Fellowship to get him back?" Evelia laughed sarcastically. "You and I both know what happened the last time you did that." Sookie sent a sideways look to Eric, wondering if her words had affected him. She knew the death of Godric, Eric's maker, had been tough on him but Eric was composed.

    I SERIOUSLY WANT TO KNOW WHO THE FELLOWSHIP ARE!! :DD

    Eric moved, leaving Sookie's view momentarily, and was not a second later standing in front of Evelia. He cupped her chin his left hand, tilting it upwards. "Your fangs came in." The way Eric said it silenced everyone in the room. Evelia stared in his eyes, the feel of his cold skin giving her a good case of the tingles. Sookie's breath hitched in her throat and she cupped her hand over her mouth to mute any sounds, not wanting to be the one who broke the silence. - I like Eric ( i googled him hehe) and i as well am wondering about his history with Evelia.

    I can tell you worke really hard on this chapter, and I appreciate that! It was very well written, and I love this, so i'm going to subscribe to this, because it just won me :DD there wasn't any spelling errors that I could detect, again, great job on this!
    April 10th, 2010 at 02:42am