Past and Present. - Comments

Is there any chance you'll be bringing this back? I've been subscribed since you wrote it, hoping for an update. You are one in a few NCIS writers that really knows how to portray the characters, it shows that's you've clocked a lot of hours watching the show. I hope to see this return, having just re-read it I am still as excited as I was about it two years ago.

I loved this. Too bad its not actually chaptered like you said it would be. But I guess I'll subscribe with the hope that you will pick it up again one day.

I love it. The way everything was worded, I felt like this was so close to how the characters are on screen, that I felt my heart flutter.

And this is going to be chaptered? Oh yeahhh. I'm subscribing, of course.

Oh my God, I was hooked by the summary. I can't wait to see where you're going with this - what is Tim trying to hide from the team? Does Natasha Peterson mean anything to him, or is there something in the house he doesn't want them to uncover? This is more suspenseful than an episode.

First things first; the chapter title. Pejoration. I'll be honest, I had no idea what that meant, but when I looked it up (with my google-fu skills ) I must say it holds a rather ominous bearing on what's to come. And it definitely fuels my curiosity.

You know, I love the way you portray Tim and Tony. Of course, you write all the characters so amazingly, but you just really blow me away with our little McNozzo. Little things like Tim noticing Ziva's singing and then Tony being really into Tim's past, and getting all excited about being in his old room. And oh, Timmy, how can you have not seen Back to the Future? It only ever plays every single day on the movie channels You really inject this persona into them that's believable and true to the show but also is undeniably your own. And you call me the queen of this pairing, please. You've surpassed me from the start, hun.

Also, Palmer's hesitation when it comes to the lightning storm just about killed me. Awww he's so adorable! *squishes*

It will be easier for the team to knock down walls in his façade; it’s in their job description, after all.

This line really sparked my interest. It's a perfect setup to hint about the mystery that's about to come, without being too obvious or overbearing. It's subtle, yet hard to miss. Just a little foreshadowing that I can't help but love.

Really, just overall it's a great job, and I can't criticize. I'm so excited to read the next installment. (and, for the record, I enjoyed it so much I paused Chaplin to read it. That's right - I paused RDJ playing my favorite actor to read your writing. ;D)

i love youuu sam