Selfless - Comments

It's a really sweet-lookin' story.
Sort of "AWE HOW CUTE."
:)
I love those stories.

you're wonderful when it comes to messages.
massages.

“You're darling, Gaspard ...”
Your darling.

THIS IS JUST SO DARN ADORABLE, MAN.
It makes me feel really warm inside.
<3

I am so hooked on this. Not surprising though, everything you write is amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really hope he doesn't cheat on her.

This is so pretty already. I love the layout and the sweet little mood his letter seems to have to it. I especially love the way he seems to apologize to her every other paragraph. He must know her very well, huh? To be imagining someone you love and their reaction to what you write? :3 I dunno, I just think it's so cute. Your writing always is.

I think you are supposed to spell "staring" like "starring". Otherwise it just means someone is looking at you weird. xD And "messages" is "massages." Other than that, the first chapter was perfect. <3

I really like the layout, it's simple but very good.
This whole story as an entirety is beautiful so far.
<3

This is very cute thus far. I love all the little things he mentions about her, like how she's probably sighing as she's reading the letter.

It's very pretty so far. I am going to have to google that actor, however... ;)

Keep up the good work!