Here is my short critique as promised. There was no spelling or grammar errors in this whole piece, or not that I've spotted. The storyline was amazing, I felt like I was almost watching it, or in it even! Your word choice is amazing overall, I could not have done it better myself; the description was just right as well. As for the dialog, it felt very real, I painted pictures in my head. You would have a excellent chance at being an author if that is one of your dreams, you must know you are a talented writer.
Secondly, you perfected the character from the book, I find you did a better job than the original person, as shocking as it is to say. And I am a big Tarzan lover, so you fully achieved your demanded task. You are also guaranteed a spot in the final three, I am posting the winners now and I will PM you with your spot once I have the final decisions made.
Secondly, you perfected the character from the book, I find you did a better job than the original person, as shocking as it is to say. And I am a big Tarzan lover, so you fully achieved your demanded task. You are also guaranteed a spot in the final three, I am posting the winners now and I will PM you with your spot once I have the final decisions made.