oooh...i really like this story. you should definitely update soon. i'd love you forever if you did...XD *wink wink* they've got good chemistry with each other, and i like that. especially with the heavy heavy sarcasm i'm a sucker for sarcasm... xp
I really like where this first Chapter is going. I love Axel's wisecracks, and Roxa's wanting to just get away from Sora and Kairi. I like that it's Axel going to get the teardrops under his eyes.
My favorite line was: "Hate to break it you, Rox, but I'm pretty sure you're legally a midget. You're what, three foot eight?" That was gold. Absolute gold. I've subscribed, and can't wait to read the next chapter.