Leather Pants. - Comments

Ohmygod, you have got to be one of my most favourite people in the world! Most people I know are like, 'the fuck is NCIS?' and you.. this. I cant even. This is perfect.

Oh my God, I loved this. It was so well written, and the imagery *kisses finger tips* Exquisite!
I freaking loved it. I want moreeee. LOl.
Maybe want to co-write a story or something?

Oh you tease! Guh, that was so very hot. McGee in tight leather pants...UNF. I especially love the fact that Abby is the one who dressed them for under cover work; it reminds me of another episode in fourth season where she helps on the outfit for Ziva. only, of course, it wasn't as hot as this. I would give anything for an episode like this.

Shameless squealing aside though, I really love your more relaxed style of writing. Like, you can tell that this is a silly little piece - it's written beautifully, yet with a much more light feeling to it. Plus you've got the characterization down pat; from McGee's nervousness to Tony's movie reference. But you also interject your own little spin on their characters, like with Tony's insecurity and then McGee making the first move on the dance floor. You do it so believably, darling, almost like these characters are yours to begin with.

I'm sorry I can't leave a better review, but I just adored this piece.

This isn't normally the sort of thing I would read, yet it somehow drew me in.
I love the way you describe things in such a deatailed way, I could picture the whole scene and everything very clearly in my mind. I think the only problem I have with it was that at the very beginning, I was a little bit confused as to what was going on. But, that being said, it doesn't take much to confuse me!
Like I said, I love how deatailed it is. You have a great way of using adjectives, and really capturing the wide range of emotions going on throughout the story.

“I can’t believe Abby talked me into this,” McGee sighs into his lemonade, avoiding my eyes.

“Well, its not as if I could have brought Ziva as my date, now, is it?” I point out to him, taking a gulp of my non-alcoholic beer.

Hahaha, great opener.

“Eyeliner? Chest exsposure? Tight leather pants?”

OH, THE IMAGES.

“We don’t want to see you seducing McGee, we want to see you get eyes on Rodriguez or Gonzales.”
I like this, it's very Gibbs. I can imagine him rolling his eyes and fidgeting as he says that to DiNozzo.

McGee shakes his head, obviously wracked with mortification.
Aww, McGee. It's a totally believeable situation for Tim to be in, it really suits his character. Especially the way DiNozzo is winding him up about it and at the same time being over-protective.

My lips spit out the last vowel of her name – Zee-vah – because I just know she’s laughing herself silly at the improvised scene that just played out on a floor-to-ceiling screen back at HQ/
Tony, you sweetheart! Typical of him letting his instincts bail him out of something and then feeling embarassed of the consequences.

I pull him closer by the small of his back just to keep appearances up – not that anyone’s really paying us any attention – and his hands come to rest on my hips. I start; I honestly didn’t know he had it in him to be even fake-forward, after that awkward confrontation with Bruce.
I like this. McGee kinda coming out of his shell in the sea of bodies. They're kinda forced onto eachother but it's like McGee knows he can trust Tony.

Holy shit, we’re practically grinding. I let out a deep breath on his neck, which is so close to mine I can even feel him gulp - and then one of his hands travels up my back, outside my shirt, a sort of half-barrier between me and the figure behind. I can’t stop goose pimples fizzling up under my skin, and as soon as I shiver McGee’s hips lurch forward - and somehow, it doesn’t feel wrong, not one tiny bit.
That is so HOT! I like how it is sort of an accident, and they were lead into it by the case and the situation, yet they're both totally into it.

Over all I loved the way that it builds up between them, from the dance floor to the bathroom, and how Tony notices that Tim isn't any more afraid than he is, which is a nice change from him being nervous. It was very well written and the description of the club and the movement was brilliant. The idea is superb too, very believeable and well thought out. Kudos!

This is good.
Well written.
Good job.

I love it Fireman Sam >.<
You know I'm no good with concrit, but trust me when I say I love this.
You're one of the few authors I know who's managed to carry this off, so kudos.
I love it >.<
It's written amazingly, and very Tony-esque.

This is Genius.