June 14th, 2010 at 10:45pm
I like this story, and I love the idea of Tony being jealous of Palmer and kinda getting knocked down a peg or two when he finds out that Ginger would much prefer to date him rather than Tony. Hillarious, and Tony rejection does not happen enough on NCIS!
Yet another girl lost to a dweb like Palmer... Loved this bit; very DiNozzo.
I like the idea of Gibbs having a massively over-complicated cup of coffee and being picky with it. If looks could kill, Tony would be six feet under right now. Oh yeah.
The concept of the story is brilliant, so kudos. Original too, I'd never read anything like this so bonus points for originality. It's well written and entertaining, and you did a good job on a rule that isn't as popular as others.
Good work, and thank you for entering.
^--- i love this!! xD so perfect~
This was a cute and funny story, i was really amused reading it~ ^^