Just You and Me and Every Millimeter In Between - Comments

  • ciarmione.

    ciarmione. (100)

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    Thank you guys. I really appreciate your kind comments. :)
    April 16th, 2010 at 11:33am
  • the apex predator;;

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    First of all, I'm on my phone so I'm sorry if it comes out weird xD
    Second. I adored it.
    It flowed nicely and I love how you used "freaking".
    It made it believable xD
    Like, personal.

    Good job :)
    April 16th, 2010 at 10:51am
  • southpaw

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    This is beautifully written. It flows so well.
    April 12th, 2010 at 08:26pm
  • Billy Michealangelo

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    I really like it, it's poetic. I felt as if I was in the story.
    April 12th, 2010 at 07:51pm
  • ciarmione.

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    First drabble in nine months that isn't for school. :)
    April 12th, 2010 at 04:19pm