i really liked this sory but it did not at all seem like a pinocchio story. I guess I took it in a different way than what was expected.
May 10th, 2010 at 03:25am
Here is my short critique as promised. I really liked the story, honest, it did not talk about his growing nose every time he lies, but the storyline was so good it did not even bother me. I like how you put other things, other than anger into perspective, but also happiness and mildly excited behaviors.
Your writing style if very different compared to things I've read recently, but it is catchy. You had no spelling or grammar errors, that I spotted anyway, and it was all around amazing. I am guaranteeing you a spot in the final three. I'll PM you with the spot number.