First off, your title isn’t capitalised right. It should be A Distinct Lack of Trust. You might want to fix it. Second off, maybe you should give your hand at making your own layout because to me, a pre-made layout just makes it seem like an author doesn’t care enough about a story to make one. Also, you lack a summary…
This story seems rather drag and honestly just doesn’t interest me. There’s just nothing that strikes it out as a story that would interest me if I chose to read it from the story page. It’s not the most unique of plot lines and some of it drags a little.
Overall, it was a bit eh. I wouldn’t have read it normally.
One last thing, your word count should be in the summary.
This story seems rather drag and honestly just doesn’t interest me. There’s just nothing that strikes it out as a story that would interest me if I chose to read it from the story page. It’s not the most unique of plot lines and some of it drags a little.
Overall, it was a bit eh. I wouldn’t have read it normally.
One last thing, your word count should be in the summary.