Take Me There - Comments

This was absolutely amazing. I've been searching all over Mibba to read a good story. I read the summary and thought it'd be okay, but you, ma'am, have more than exceeded my expectations. I was hooked from the beginning.

I love this story so much! It seems so real!

In chapter 19 you copy pasted the story in twice and so it stops most of the way through and restarts from the beginning, and it was very confusing for a second.

this whole story reminded me of the song 'running' by no doubt and i kept listening to that song while reading this : )

P.S this is my first comment ever i just had to say something about this amazing story!!

Aaaaaagh i cant believe you didnt write a sequel for this amazing story! Ohmygod please pleease pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaase write one because i would just LOVE to see Nick and Julissa's relationship progress and i really dont like how this story ended so quick. Soo please reconsider! I loooooved this story! Now on to the next one(:

TMT is over...
This was such a good chapter!
Julissa's character development throughout this story is really amazing! Nicholas' as well. You really got to grow with the characters in this story and that's writing at its best! The end does the whole series justice and if you write a one shot or not, i'll make up my own happy ending for Jules and Nick in my mind :P I just want to let you know how much I enjoyed this story! It was seriously awesome Taylor! Your writing is a lot more mature and in depth here. There some really good metaphors throughout it as well. I think you writing this and then writing something like Nonnie or Nonroe, it shows how versatile you are as a writer and that'll get you really far!
I'm sad to see TMT end, but it was brought to such a good close. :')
I'm so happy for Jules and Nick that I feel pathetic right now because they aren't even real! You see, you've got me thinking all your characters exist now! :P
k, so awesome awesome job Taylor! <3
.xoMar.

I think this was probably THE BEST story i have EVER read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeah, I know I haven't commented in a while, but once I realized that the epilogue for this story was posted, I couldn't resist the chance to write a review.

First off, I would like to say that this was an overall great story; one of the best fan-fictions I have ever read. Taylor, your creative mind and well-put plots continue to amaze me, and I'm so happy to have stumbled upon your "Broken Danger" story while browsing for a story to read. "Take Me There", like mentioned before, reminds me of a story called "Saving Zoe". In that story, the main character is younger sister, Echo, and she had basically always imagined that her sister, Zoe, had the perfect life. And after Zoe's death, Echo began to realize that she needed to stand on her own instead of trying to live the life her sister had supposedly had, finding out about her inappropriate behaviors in her diary.

Though this story shows some similarities to that book, I do see the great difference between them. While I enjoyed reading Zoe's diary entries through the eyes of an inquiring, young Echo, I have become strangely addicted to Julissa's thoughts and memories of her sister Cass. Like someone mentioned before, if Julissa wasn't Julissa, then this story wouldn't be what it is.

I love how you made her go through all of the stages when experiencing the death of a loved one, and I appreciate how she often thought of her sister when it came to her screwed up feelings for Nick. Though being with Nick was what Jules truly needed, it was quite refreshing to see her experience the guilt instead of jumping up into Nick's arms. Her guilt and fear was a challenge for Nick, and in the end, he prevailed, though it's sad to know that something so dreadful had to push them together.

Truthfully, I'm upset to see that her mother wasn't at Cass's funeral, but maybe it was for the best. It is obvious that you only get a once in a lifetime chance to actually say goodbye to a lost loved one, but their mother needs the help, and I'm pretty sure that if she attended the funeral in the state that she was in, she would have completely lost it...and she had already gone off the deep end before the police had come to announce Cass's untimely death.

Honestly, I didn't expect Cass to be killed off. While I have read the story's summary, I must have missed the part where it said that time was too late for Julissa and Nick to save her. This story was full of unexpected surprises about life and reality and that's what I love about it. You kept me on my toes.

Sequel? For me, I would prefer that you not do a sequel. In truth, I honestly don't know what you would write about other than the progression of Nick's and Julissa's relationship and the restoration of Julissa's relationship with her mother, but that can go without being written. I think it's healthy for us to use our minds on the future of Julissa and her family and friends. After all that she and her mother went through, I can imagine that it would take some serious amount of time for them to be back on good terms...or at least to where it isn't awkward for the two of them. So...no to the sequel for me...but I would enjoy a hefty and happy one-shot from you.

Lastly, I want to thank you for keeping a realistic image in this story. Not many fan-fictions drop the surreal acts and I appreciate it greatly, Taylor. Can't wait to read more from you!

The last chapter made me cry. It was amazing. I'm still crying.

You updated!

I can't believe this is it - the end of Take Me There. I got too attached to this story as well. It was one great journey, though, me and my silly metaphors. Honestly, I didn't see that Nick liked her before later chapters, I wanted him to like her, but I thought he was confused... just like she thought, right? But later, with all of his kissing her schemes and the way he acted, it became obvious to all of us, I think, that that crazy, cute curly head was changing his perspective and developing feelings - the only person who failed to see that apparent change was Julissa, which got me so frustrated in times.

But if Julissa weren't Julissa then this story wouldn't be... well, this story. Julissa's life and chracter made this so interesting. Sure, Joe was a nice friendly character, and Nick was captivating as always, but Julissa's thoughts were what I read and what kept me coming back. She has incredible... way of thinking? In a way, she is so fragile, but she is strong as well. I thought she had gone just a bit insane towards the end, not bad insane - the kind of insane that led to clarity and fresh air. Then in the last real chapter, before this amazing epilogue, I thought things had become clear to her...

Then she starts it all up again in this chapter and pushes Nick away slightly. I wanted to jump into my laptop and talk some sense into her. If any of the people at Cass' funeral judged her, they're not even worthy of her worring over them because it doesn't matter if Nick was Cass' boyfriend before [even if it does sound a bit harsh] he loves Julissa now and by hiding or running away from the love they have for each other... that wouldn't bring Cass back, and I think that Julissa needed to understand that. And I have a feeling she did, right?

I feel bad for her mom, though. Because with everything she had done and been through and put Jules through she wasn't at her daughter's funeral, and even if the funeral is not a happy place to be... I think that people want to say that last goodbye to their loved ones and that's something their mom didn't get to do. That makes me feel sorry for her, maybe it would have been good for her.

And in the end Julissa and Nick! They are possibly the couple with most tragedy out of all your stories. Julissa's life is just so messed up and Nick is so great... but there is a lot of dark moments, heck, the whole story takes on such a different and darker atmosphere than the rest of your stories - but I loved every single word of it.

So, I wanted to congratulate you on succesfully completing yet another amazing story and even though you have no plans for a sequel [and honestly, I can't see what it would be about now that Julissa is finally gettting better and all...] but I am looking forward to a one-shot ... and if you can make that a couple of oneshots. Hahaha! : )

- Maya :D

you made me cry ):
stories that make me cry are very rare.

great story, honestly.

I think that was the perfect ending

I was REALLY hoping there would be a sequel but I understand that sometimes a sequel isn't needed. This was a great story and I can't wait for more stories from you.(:

LOVE LOVE LOVEEDDDD ITT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <33333 you're a phenomenal writer, two thumbs up!!!!

Now I don't know what I'm going to read! This story was amazing. The ups and downs... More downs than anything but wow. She went through so much. And nick was there. Oh my gosh

Your writing and creativity is astonishing and I just wanted to say that was amazing!

I think you did an amazing job on the ending :)
Although I wish we knew if they were together or not.
Hopefully you will decide to do the one-shot && let us all know :)
I am truly gonna miss these characters.
I feel like I've related to Julissa more than some characters I've read.
Oh Nicholas, how can I not love you?
So once again amazing ending to such an incredible story.
You are a truly gifted writer.

I really loved this and I'm sad it's over but it was a perfect ending.
I hope you decide to do a one shot!
Can't wait for more of your creations :]

I love this story! It's very unique and well written(: I love all your stories!

Wow, this is truly beautiful story I ever read. This story is very unique and dark. I love it. Your English writing has improved a lot better. It's beautiful. Between Nick and Julissa, their love is very special. :)

I love it! It was sad...yet happy...yet made me want to scream...yet made me happy again...and even though I felt Jules moving on...I still like a small piece of her was doubting her actions. It was a beautiful way to end things. Whether you do a sequel...a one-shot...or nothing at all, I will be a fan of your writing!

Thank you so much for showing a side of writing that was clearly different for you!