Please Be There - Comments

  • ;____; This was so sad. Poor bb Roxas. The way you wrote him so broken up... was so upsetting. :/ Because I can just see him, crying like this, his head filled up with these thoughts, written in the descriptions you use to express it. Poor baby. How Axel would hurt him like that, but he wouldn't give up on him, just hoping that somehow, he'd turn their house back into a home. Which is funny, because I just heard that song for the first time ever. But that's besides the point. My Gawd, though. After him doing all he could and such regrets lingering on him... I can feel him, and the pain that would strike him so hard. ;^^^^;
    May 12th, 2010 at 07:00am
  • Wow. This was so beautifully written. The words were so descriptive, so full of raw emotion. I loved the phrase "The monster of broken hearts reared its ugly head."
    This was so beautiful.
    In Love
    Everything was just so...wonderfully written! The writing was fantastic, I can't get over it.
    April 29th, 2010 at 02:50am