Hold on Tonight and Mesmerize Me - Comments

only problem is there's NO WAY he's be able to light those cancer sticks after they'd been soaked.
But you're right, romance is getting pretty hard to write....damn you cliches!!!!!
anyways, i liked the POV shift, because it showed Lizzy in a completely different light.
Good job :)

lol
"It tastes like lemonade, and then it DOESN'T taste like lemonade."
That's how I described tequilla when I was 12 XD

I thought the phone conversation chapter was good :]
Stephi = Ophilia
Lizzy = Jenn
That's all I can say XDDDDD

go technical geeks! XD
curiouser and curiouser.....
couldn't help myself :)

lol, go crazy people XD
Interesting start
My only request is to move the text all the way to the right, because the parts that overlap the pic are a bit hard to read
but I love the background pic :D

Wow! I have no chance haha. This is awesome! I love the craziness of it (the redbull, chocolate, and running around in the backyard in underwear had me rollin'!) It is sweet,, and romances are difficult to write :/ but I think you wrote this amazing well!