Wow, this was intense. I totally enjoyed it, the suspense and how even after Zanden's death, we still don't know who the killer was. I enjoyed how you included the picture and lyric subtly into the story, as well.
Unfortunately, you broke some rules in this story! :'(
AprilJazmine:
Rules? * Put the picture in the background or description * Include word count, your lyric, and link to this page in summery.
I will not disqualify you for that, but you will loose points for not including your picture and your lyric (10. "Sleep with one eye open, gripping your pillow tight." -Metallica)
I will still judge your entry based on content however. You did a very good job and I did enjoy the story lots! Thank you so much for entering! :)
Unfortunately, you broke some rules in this story! :'(I will not disqualify you for that, but you will loose points for not including your picture and your lyric (10. "Sleep with one eye open, gripping your pillow tight." -Metallica)
I will still judge your entry based on content however. You did a very good job and I did enjoy the story lots! Thank you so much for entering! :)