Um, there's a lot of stories with this title, doesn't mean the plot is the same. So yeah, next time think before you comment all right, I dont' mean to sound rude, but I doubt that its same story.
Okay, this is a really good story, I just have a few grammatical complaints. Sometimes the paragraphs are repetitious, like some words are used over and over and obvious points are re-stated again and again, which isn’t good. Also, there are some random and meaningless lines that kind of throw things off a bit. Other than that, this is a really good story, and I hope you continue to update! I’d like to know what happens next!