Painting Flowers - Comments

  • Tori the Elf

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    More? :D
    August 18th, 2011 at 04:26am
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    I really like this story, i hope you keep writing soon
    :D
    November 2nd, 2010 at 02:55pm
  • beckrexz

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    Great story really love it. If you need some ideas of just someone to read over the chapters I would be glad to. Thanks for writing have fun! :)
    October 18th, 2010 at 02:17am
  • mk ultra

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    I love this! Gabriella sounds so pretty.
    July 27th, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • Siyori Sereu

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    overall good storie but try using POV's it gets a little confusing with who's talking.
    July 22nd, 2010 at 05:41am
  • n3n3j0y9

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    Love It Awesome Update !
    July 3rd, 2010 at 02:59am
  • Ron.

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    Not bad at all. I shall get crackin' on my chapter! =D
    July 3rd, 2010 at 02:14am
  • awful sensations;

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    love thissss<3
    June 22nd, 2010 at 03:58am
  • Bucky.Barnes

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    Um, there's a lot of stories with this title, doesn't mean the plot is the same. So yeah, next time think before you comment all right, I dont' mean to sound rude, but I doubt that its same story.
    June 14th, 2010 at 02:26am
  • animal soup

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    I love this. x]
    Update soooon!
    June 13th, 2010 at 07:32pm
  • Coh!3

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    Ummmm.....i hav someone on mi friends list that has the same story title as you! She even wrote it before you did......
    June 13th, 2010 at 06:43am
  • Shadowday

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    Jealousy always gets the best of you. More please!
    June 12th, 2010 at 10:31pm
  • Meganator

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    NOO! Gaby Come Back!!!
    June 11th, 2010 at 04:45am
  • Bucky.Barnes

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    that was pretty awesome =-]
    June 11th, 2010 at 04:28am
  • n3n3j0y9

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    MOre LOve It Update...
    May 30th, 2010 at 07:59am
  • PartyOnDudes!

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    Ooooh. Jealousy!

    Fantastic job, Lola! I'll get crackin' on my chapter now. =]
    May 30th, 2010 at 02:42am
  • n3n3j0y9

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    Love It Update
    May 28th, 2010 at 01:54am
  • likeswimmingcircles

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    Okay, this is a really good story, I just have a few grammatical complaints.
    Sometimes the paragraphs are repetitious, like some words are used over and over and obvious points are re-stated again and again, which isn’t good. Also, there are some random and meaningless lines that kind of throw things off a bit.
    Other than that, this is a really good story, and I hope you continue to update!
    I’d like to know what happens next!
    May 28th, 2010 at 12:48am
  • Bucky.Barnes

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    aww cute =)
    May 27th, 2010 at 02:45am
  • n3n3j0y9

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    Love It Update Love It !
    May 25th, 2010 at 07:44pm