OMG I love it. It's unusual and it reminds me of this show I absolutely love watching (South Of Nowhere). Sadly, it won't let me few LolaXBunny or First!'s profile. :'( Please add me, I think you both are amazing writers :D
It was an okay chapter. It would be good if there was a picture of valerie in the characters tab. PS: Charlie doesn't seem much like a rebel, i mean she was even scared to call Valerie a bitch. Also she didn't even get that Valerie had sex with a frat boy when it was obvious, then she all gasped when she finally got it. Really a one night stand isn't much to call someone a skank and whore over especially when the person is drunk and isn't in her right mind.
I like this story, its one of the girlxgirl that like attracts you to read plus it isn't like a porno which is cool. I just really like it. PS: cool backround its pretty, the light pink floral backround and black&white picture go together good.