I Want You to Live - Comments

  • Levitate.

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    Oh my god. I loved this story. I'm crying right now. But tht's also because of a personal experience with a military couple I had known. This was an amazing story. And I thank you for it. I hate reading things tht make me cry, but sometimes you just have to. I know it's been a year since this story was finished, but it would be amazing to see a sequal.
    June 16th, 2017 at 04:11am
  • ProverbofHell

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    Thank you so much for this amazing, heartfelt story. Slow beginnings and fast declines and true heartbreak! I've read this in a day(some of it at work I admit!) and I am glad I did! Thank you!
    July 28th, 2016 at 04:31pm
  • xChAoSx

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    you are killing me
    March 20th, 2014 at 04:55am
  • JustThinking

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    new to the story and I think I'm a bit in love with it.. it's simply that awesome.. if awesome even covers it.. the characteres, the plot.. damn.. hmm.. windering how things will go from here, calling the father so quickly maybe wasn't the best idea out there... other than that, sorry about your dog, hope he's feeling better soon and congratulations on the other stuff (yes I am that forgetfull xD) hmm... take all the time you need, this story is worth it if time is all there's needed. With that said I can't wait to read even more of this. ^.^
    May 19th, 2012 at 12:48am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    Sorry to hear about your dog, hope he's better soon. Congrats on everything! Can't wait for more!
    May 6th, 2012 at 09:26pm
  • DELETETHISPLEASE

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    WHAT!? WHAT IS THIS NONSENSE!? I AM SO CONFUSED! but update soon please! =}
    January 11th, 2012 at 05:03am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    Congrats!!! That's awesome!! Hope everything goes well for you and your BF =)

    I can't wait for him to prorpose to her.
    January 8th, 2012 at 08:36am
  • DELETETHISPLEASE

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    wow congrats! that's awesome that you're pregnant! i hope everything goes well and smoothly! don't worry about updates if you're busy, it's interesting that he wants to propose to her. hopefully nothing too sad happens haha. =}
    January 7th, 2012 at 03:16am
  • DELETETHISPLEASE

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    very impressive, you deserve more comments than this. i just want you to know that i appreciate your writing of this story, military is in my family and i've witnessed the heart aches that come with it, while also seeing the pride and courage and i have so much respect for it so thanks for writing this all so well! =} keep up the good work!
    December 20th, 2011 at 09:04am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    I just found this and I love it. I love military themed stories. I respect Armed Forces girlfriends and wives more than anything in the world. They are the strongest women I know of. I can't wait for more.
    November 18th, 2011 at 06:17am
  • DarkAngel666

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    I really like this and hope you update soon xoxo
    September 13th, 2010 at 07:38pm
  • hopelessdreamer

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    I'm always looking forward to the updates of this story. I really like that it's main guy is a soldier because there aren't a lot of stories out there like this. And it's all sweet but not cheesy sweet. I really like your story so I hope you keep writing. :)
    June 11th, 2010 at 09:36am
  • Napolean

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    I really like this story.
    It's very unique, I've never seen a plotline based around a soldier, but maybe I just don't get out much.
    Either way, I like the cute blooming relationship...
    I hope you continue it ^^
    May 7th, 2010 at 10:04am