May 9th, 2010 at 04:41pm
This was a really good second chapter.
He laid back down on the bed, his head propped up from the pillows. Roxas rolled over, taking a pillow away from his makeshift headrest, the pillow in front laying flat. He laid down on the pillow, staring up at the ceiling, the movie still on his mind, as well as the amused chuckle he heard near the mirror. What was that? he pondered, turning towards the mirror.
He saw himself, laying back on the bed, his gaze one of confusion. A speck of red, a bright obnoxious red, showed itself behind him. Roxas turned around to where it was, but nothing was behind him. He got up and turned the light on before turning his attention back to the mirror, moving to sit on the edge of the bed to get a closer look.
Hairs on the back of his neck stood on end, as he saw a lump of black leather laying on his bed in the mirror, tufts of red at the head of the lump. It looked like a person laying there, but when he turned around to look at his bed, no one was there. The lump moved, and Roxas jumped back, moving to the side of the bed.
It rolled over, and wild green eyes stared back at him, a smirk placed on what were the lips of the man laying there. "That movie was boring," he stated, his head propped up by his hand. "Why you got so scared I'll never know." An amused smile dissolved onto his mouth.
I'm like dead serious, this part scared the shit outta me.
Woot, I love it so far!!
I love it!