Eden - Comments

OH MY GOD!!! Ive started reading your story in one go and must say that the new years countdown is definately my fav!.....off to read the rest :) x x

i like this. sorry i haven't commented for the last few chapters, life has gotten hectic lol!
but you're an excellent writer and i'm sure i'll like everything that you write in the future. :D

I really liked the ending about her wanting to listen to the album and he gives her a little kiss. That was lovely :) ONTO THE SECOND ONE, WOOOOO!

oops, Revelations**, not revalations. xD

Bravo, mon amie. (:
hehe. very nice.
i can't wait for the first chapter of Revalations. lol.
its gonna be dope. :D!
<3

Beautiful, loved it :)

love it :)

haha well she thought her paintings were a bit more important for some reason thanks for al the feedback xo

The story has been beautiful. I can't wait to see how you end it.

Just post that last chapter? (A)

I think we'd all be really grateful if you did :)

Great update :) (But doesn't she need a little more than paintings though? Like.. clothes and such? :P)

-Xx

When I saw that you updated, it made my day.

Ah well, I think I did a pretty god damn bloody good job helping you with chapter 18. Don't 'cha think?
:)

WOOOO GO HILLIE! YOU GO GIRL! UHHUH. MMMMHM -snaps-
I just turned into a ghetto black woman. My alter ego.

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter because I know what happens. Woot.

UPDATEEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEE lol :) love this :D

My favourite storyhere, only 3 chapters left!!! :( Well it has been so good so thank you for that!

Thank you so much for the update -- this story has really been growing on me. A sequel would be awesome, but never the less, it is up to you.

Yeah, I must agree: you played Mige's character well :P

Hahahaha, I snickered through this entire chapter.
Mige would so do that in real life.

Yes I agree! Another chapter super soon would be super awesome! Lol

Another chapter would be awesome :)

Great work!
-Xx

I really love this ^^
Cant wait for the next chapter <3

i loooved this as well. it made me happy.
i like the way you wrote it; i wish i could write like you. seriously.
: D