I really, really like this. <33333 Ahh I'm so excited for more. :DDDD The picture alone... got stared at... for hours. XD It's so pretty. The colors and shading. <3 And the smile that Kura has is just uughh<333 I thought he was holding onto a shovel at first, but the look of it, especially the orange, is perfect for this. It looks so crime-scene ish.
The point of view was really good too. <3 Maybe it was mind-over-matter, but I could feel the atmosphere of the story settled into it. Like he really was a cop, which he is, but you were able to use that so well. And I can see him being so Yugi-y, in his cute yet strong little ways, always thinking, always processing. But how he'd give over to Bakura. <3333
Hehe, I love Bakura's lines. I could hear him saying them, the seduction in his voice, how he was fluent in such romanticism. And the idea of his voice saing "Ringu." PRERFECTT OMG. He'd say it with such tender roughness. Him havig blue eyes is also really, really sweet. They're fitting. I can so see him as a blue-eyed Bakurrra.
Ahh I'm so excited for more. :DDDD
The picture alone... got stared at... for hours. XD
It's so pretty. The colors and shading. <3 And the smile that Kura has is just uughh<333 I thought he was holding onto a shovel at first, but the look of it, especially the orange, is perfect for this. It looks so crime-scene ish.
The point of view was really good too. <3 Maybe it was mind-over-matter, but I could feel the atmosphere of the story settled into it. Like he really was a cop, which he is, but you were able to use that so well. And I can see him being so Yugi-y, in his cute yet strong little ways, always thinking, always processing. But how he'd give over to Bakura. <3333
Hehe, I love Bakura's lines. I could hear him saying them, the seduction in his voice, how he was fluent in such romanticism. And the idea of his voice saing "Ringu." PRERFECTT OMG. He'd say it with such tender roughness. Him havig blue eyes is also really, really sweet. They're fitting. I can so see him as a blue-eyed Bakurrra.
I'm excited fer moar. x]