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  • A Heart Black n Blue

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    As I've told you a few hundred times before, I love all the dark atmosphere in these parts where they're in this pit of hell. I also ADORE Shane for humming that song to keep Cassiel calm, it was very sweet.
    And of course the part where Zach and Shane talk about her and the whole "who's in love with who" thing freaking rocked.In your latest chapter I especially liked how Cassie was concerned about what was troubling him and how he avoided to look her in the eye.Last but not least, the part where she shows him her scars and the thing about angel venom amazed me, even though I've no idea why.
    June 25th, 2011 at 10:11am
  • briannal14

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    I'm finished!! Sorry about y'alls band thing. Love this!! Update!!
    June 17th, 2011 at 12:01am
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    I think it is derik's brother.I also think jimmy is his kid
    June 16th, 2011 at 11:51pm
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    It's not Blaine. It can't be. He's too nice.
    June 16th, 2011 at 11:42pm
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    So if this initials are B.D.L. then it has to be blaine. Right?
    June 16th, 2011 at 11:37pm
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    Ok then. I think hes Blain Locke's twin.
    June 16th, 2011 at 11:20pm
  • briannal14

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    I officially have no clue who the guy is. Since you said the person has killed people in this story the maybe it is the guy who raped her.
    June 16th, 2011 at 11:18pm
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    Ok I'm just gonna take a wildddd guess at who the mysterious guy is since i can't figure it out. Shane's dad?
    June 16th, 2011 at 11:12pm
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    Yep I think its Jimmy's dad considering he was the kind of the demons.
    June 16th, 2011 at 10:34pm
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    Ok maybe its not that guy. Jimmy's dad?
    June 16th, 2011 at 10:25pm
  • briannal14

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    I love this! I only just finished chapter 11 and i wanted to say that i think the mysterious guy is the vamp who raped her.
    June 16th, 2011 at 10:18pm
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    Baha...
    Knew it.
    xD
    and well...
    Rock music hits the soul and brings it to life.
    Fuck that bitch who fucking canceled the concert.
    So what there's a few cuss words in a song?
    It's not really effecting people of this time.
    Now...
    If it were a long time ago...
    Yea like 100 years then it would be an issue and the devils music
    June 16th, 2011 at 03:09am
  • A Heart Black n Blue

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    ....................All I have to say is, you'd better NOT FREAKING KILL CASSIE AT THE END OF THIS STORY OR I'LL BE EFFING DEPRESSED!!!Not that I can actually tell you what to do- even though that'd be niiice lol-but it'd be so sad =( It does make the latest chapters irritatingly interesting though.Damn you lol =p

    "My own personal hell hole.
    It was steep and darkness gushed out of it like the devil’s fountain, blackening the dehydrated sand around it. It was probably filled with monsters, slaves of the night, come to torture me until I would beg for death. One of them was Blaine’s brother, and there would be another monster lurking down there, one much more frightening than Blaine’s brother, my monster. And he was worse than anything I could ever encounter down there.
    But my brother was down there, and that’s all that mattered. He was the light in my darkness."
    BEST.DESCRIPTION.EVER!!!

    "I focused on Blaine, his black shadowy figure worked its way around the large blocks of broken asphalt around the large hole that was settled in the middle of the road. But I soon closed my eyes again when Colton started walking after him. I started humming the soothing lullaby I knew by heart, hoping it would help me. And it did, just the slightest but for that I was thankful.
    I felt a shiver creep its way up my spine as the shadows crawled up my skin like spiders. It felt like my lungs were going to implode from lack of oxygen. And I was afraid I was pulling Colton’s fur out as my hands clenched around the strands."
    She sings a lullaby in the darkness?EERIE =D I like it *creepy smile*

    "Then Shane hummed along with me, hitting each note perfectly. I looked at him shocked; he just gave me a small smile as he led Aidan carefully down the slope. I stopped humming, not wanting to ruin the melody with my imperfect mumbles."
    Shane, Shane, Shane..When will you stop being so sweet??? *fangirl melts away* xD

    " I looked over at Shane, and shivered. The way the fire’s flame gave him a frightening façade. The way the light flickered across his face was the same way the guards did. His eyes looked sunken in, making his eyes look black instead of his usual soft green. His pale skin casted a yellow glow and he face was made up of sharp perfect angles. All he needed was the uniform and he would be one of the guards who tortured and raped me while I was in my cell."
    For the billionth time, poor Cassiel ='(

    “Permitted my ass,” I wanted to throw her into the wall. Then feed her to Lucy, not that I would blame Lucy for not wanting to eat something as terrible as Hillary. I wouldn’t want to either."
    Epic.Just epic.xD Hilary is too much of a b*tch to handle, but we wouldn't want Lucy get a food poisoning now, would we?

    "His mouth opened slightly, exposing two rows of his sharp pointed teeth, he sounded like he was choking on his words.
    “That’s why she’s looking for Tristan again, it’s her final deed.”
    ='( ='( ='(

    Random, but have I ever told you how much I love it when dark stuff like that?=p
    May 9th, 2011 at 06:59pm
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    Those tornados have been bitches...
    And well I hope your safe now...
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    0.0
    she better not die...
    S-She can't die...
    May 9th, 2011 at 08:15am
  • EvilMonique

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    Heavens!!! This story has me so captivated. I was only planning on reading a chapter or two tonight and the rest tomorrow, but I couldn't stop once I started.
    I love it!!
    Please update soon!!!!
    April 17th, 2011 at 02:19am
  • A Heart Black n Blue

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    Guess who's back?=p

    “But she’s fine outside at night,” Shane objected.

    “Partial darkness, she can deal with,” Zach narrowed his eyes at him. “It’s complete darkness she’s terrified of. She was kept in the dark for nearly two years and the only light she saw was the fire the guards burned her with.”
    Poor Cassie..=(

    “My brother steals energy from whatever he can, like all demons. We can steal energy from whatever we can, if there isn’t a food source nearby. That’s why your batteries are dead.”

    “How can we not smell him?” Shane asked as he threw the bag on the ground in frustration.

    “He’s part demon,” Blaine told him calmly, which made it much more intimating. “He is in control of all of your senses. He can make you see, feel, taste, smell, and hear anything he wants you too, and in this case, he doesn’t want you to smell him.”

    “Damn,” Zach hissed.

    I LOVED THIS for a strange reason lol.Not sure why, maybe 'cause it sounds like the bad guy is so freaking powerful and invisible, a ghost on a stealth mission :D

    "And he did, I led Aidan, gently tugging on his reins as we walked over the leaf imbedded ground. I could hear the boys’ quite footfalls behind me as we walked towards the fallen city."
    That was so POETIC!!!!*.*

    Gah.I'm tired of saying this, but it's true.Amazing chapter as always ^ ^
    April 2nd, 2011 at 11:03am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    I LOVE DERICKS SONG...
    *cough cough*
    What? I'm a little over obsessed with MCR
    March 29th, 2011 at 01:06am
  • Secret__Crush

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    um.... i wanna read this but the text is too dark...
    March 28th, 2011 at 11:39pm
  • A Heart Black n Blue

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    I'm sorry..thought I had posted this a long time ago but it turns out I forgot -.-''''Anyhow...I LOVED the new chapter as always ^ ^ , espscially how Michael was finally able to do something to help Cassie.Thanks so much for this, I'm very fond of him, even if the mere thought of how his life ended makes me sad..

    "I narrowed my eyes at him, fully aware of the wolves circling around us, “You take orders? How fitting, you’re trained.”
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    "Oh, I’m sorry. I forgot to formally introduce myself, my names is Thutmose,” he introduced himself boldly.
    “Well then I can formally say this. Go to hell,” I spat.
    LOOOOOOL!Go, Cassie, go!XD

    I'm not into blood and horror in general, but when the boys killed those filthy dogs, boy, did I enjoyed it!*creepy smile* And the final scene,

    "But as we walked past Thutmose, a slimy hand wrapped around my ankle.
    I sucked in a breath and fought back the scream of horror as I looked down to see him starring up at me, his mouth seemed to me permanently paralyzed into a terrifying smirk, his breath was labored and uneven, but that didn’t stop him from saying his last words, “He’ll get you… Cassiel… No matter where you go… or who you’re with… he’ll always find you. Always.”

    FREAKING ROCKED!!!!!!
    March 19th, 2011 at 07:34pm
  • kittykandra

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    That bad guy has a weird name... Very good chapter!! Update soon and good luck with the band!
    March 15th, 2011 at 05:26am