This was an aww-mazing chapter! Lol. Scuse my corniness. I feel kinda bad for hating on Colton, I hope he'll forgive me. I still favor Shane!!! Carly is the cutest! I was super psyched when she said that Cassiel and Shane love each other! Ha! I knew it!!!! This really made my night. Now I can dream happily tonight. Thanks!!!
I don't really have much to say,but I just wanted to get this out of my chest:Soooo..Colton's actually a decent guy????????The most shocking discovery of all!!xD o.O OK then,I..I'll try to like him a bit more lol.
The part with Carly drawing Shane and Cassiel holding hands was so cute and funny! *.* But of course you had to ruin it with Jimmy drawing her with death eyes lol -.-' Great.Just great.
<"I laughed and heard Shane snickering as Colton nursed his arm, “What was that for?!”
“For being a jerk!” I called back climbing into my tent, “I don’t have to be ‘poise and perfect’ like I have to be at the castle and I don’t have to be a role model for Jimmy. So you better watch your ass, or I’m gonna kick it,” I warned zipping the tent, and changed clothes>
<“You don’t tell me anything anymore,” he accused.
“Sorry,” I apologized, “and this is Colton Nevatrix.”
“You’re the werewolf,” Zane narrowed his black eyes; “he hasn’t hurt you, has he?”
“No Zane,” I sighed, “I hurt him.”
“Good girl!” he slapped his green tail against the water.
Colton glared at us.>
Especially the previous two scenes xD And it seems like Colton finally had his ass kicked LOL, both being told off by Cassiel and Aidan kicking him..SERVES HIM RIGHT! I mean seriously, how can he be so insensitive with the horsie, he can turn into an animal too,can't he?I though he'd respect it a bit more!I also liked their visit to New York even though it lasted so little, I know it may sound weird, but it seems like a dream to me, being able to wander around an abandoned city!I love searching for old stuff lol and this'd be a quite nice opportunity*.* And about the demon's shadow hiding in Cassiel's doll..LOVED THIS IDEA!!!It was such a perfect ending for the chap!Good thing you updated right after that or the suspense would've killed me-.- When I read the demon's shadow was trying to take Cassie's body and kill her I almost had a heart attack O.O, but then part of the mystery about its identity and the unknown person was revealed and I stopped breathing lol,I was like "*reading the forbidden lines* yeah okay, lets move*reads next line, realizes what just happened,goes back to previous lines* uuuuh, what???* understands everything* HOLY SH*T!!!!!" xD I like Blaine a lot, even though we just met him, hope he'll be around for a while=) All in all great job(like always)! Anxious for what's next!
Amazing!! I love this story!!! i love shane and zach!!! but Colton gives me the creeps :P does colton actually like cassiel ? idk he seems like a bit of a jerk .... anyways update soon please??? !!!
I am lost. I just read the first chapter and don't even know what they are talking about. I love vampires, though. And I think this is going to turn out well.
Hahaha!! You are officially the best author EVER!!! Thanks for that! Enjoy your sleep! OMG Cassie's brother and Shane's father will be found soon!! Blaine is so kind.
GAH!! All those hints...and i knew who it was from the beginning.... but i was late xD I stumbled upon this story and its FAN FREAKINGTASTIC! like holy bjeezus! I love lovE loVE lOVE LOVE Zane <3 best merboy everr! and of course I love evryone else. I loved Colton..until he became a douche -_- Whichever one doesn't get Cassie..I'll take ;D
Omg I would have thought there would be way more comments then this! Your story is amazing! I feel like I am reading a really book! I love it so much and I like how it is different then most stories on mibba. I can't wait to read the next chapter and I will be telling my friends on here about your story :)
I hope somehow Zane kills colton... Drowning maybe... Yes drowning... And hillary should die. Period. Now now now update now now now now now (getting tired of typing now but) now now now now now now now now.
Love how even though Cassiel hardly knows a lot about her brother she still cares my older brother is one of my best friends wouldn't know what to do without him...hope she finds him!
I still like Shane more....
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