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  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    *drowns in suspense*
    ahhhhhhhhhhhhh
    update protoooooo...
    Paleaseeeeeee
    January 30th, 2011 at 05:01pm
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    Woa Woa Woa wait up here. How the fuck does this story not have like a bazillion comments...
    Update soon...
    This is like by far the best story I have ever read on this website...
    Trust me I have 5 pages of subscriptions...
    But it would be awkwarly awesome if Shane just turned out to be a prince...
    But this story was just so amazing...
    Jeez its better than amazing I just cant put it into words...
    Well yea....
    Update, and I'll try to get you some more readers by adding your story name in one of my stories...
    This story is soo good it should be published its so good...
    January 30th, 2011 at 06:23am
  • kittykandra

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    I loved this chapter!! I still love Shane the most, even more now after this chapter! Colton is a dog! Both literally and figuratively! He's such a jerk.. Shane all the way!! Sorry Zach.... This unknown person has got me even more confused now!!
    January 14th, 2011 at 06:15am
  • A Heart Black n Blue

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    YAY!!!
    An update after so long!=D=D=D
    And WHAT an update,lol.

    "Michael was here 'Run Cassie,keep running!'he chanted repeatedly.
    But I couldn't,fate wouldn't let me"

    "The moment he left,was the moment
    I both gained and lost my sanity,and
    I broke down"
    Weee,
    I loved those two phrases,they were so
    SAD and dramatic,beautiful and inspising!
    The whole scene with her running in the forest was really great too,it's like it was taken out of a movie or something.

    "Jealousy shot through my veins,
    I wanted to be the one that held her,
    I wanted to be the one who murmured sweet words in her ear.
    I wanted to be the one that was there for her but
    I wasn't,and that pained me"
    Oooh,
    Shane meets the famous green eyed monster lol!Those lines were sooo sweet though=)

    As sweet and depressing it was when
    Cassie pleaded him not to let
    Jimmy see her die 'cause he has already witnessed two many deaths="(

    "it's a funny story actually. I'm named after the archangel Cassiel, in a failed attempt to get the angels on our side. Well, Michael would call me his angel and that my scars were my wings. That's why I wouldn't let them take away my scars on my back', she explained, her eyes drooped."
    That was plain awesome!!!
    Really,no comments,
    I surrender=p

    I also loved the scene where she asked
    Shane to stay with her=D
    And I'm an official
    Colton hater from now on,how dare he make fun of her?!
    Stupid mutt
    January 13th, 2011 at 08:54am
  • PacoTacoMan

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    I love this story, the entire storyline is so well done, from the plot to the character development. Keep up the good work! And my guess for our mystery man is Jimmy's biological father and also (this one I'm not entirely sure about) Blaine Lockes twin.
    January 11th, 2011 at 05:02am
  • MrsStarrBayBeh

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    After i finished the last update i couldnt put how i felt into words, but just know at the end, i was like afjfdjkdidudehjfdhf && i tried to pull my hair out lol i <3 it
    December 19th, 2010 at 05:21pm
  • Brina

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    awesome! plz tho! i have a hunch on who mystery dude is but i want to know sooooooooooooooon.....loved the creepy micheal part, plz update soon.
    November 27th, 2010 at 02:53pm
  • SkilttezXxlove

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    I just finished your latest chapter and I just found your story two days ago, now you have me addicted. I have to say keep up the good work because your doing an amazing job. I love your writing style by the way. :)
    November 24th, 2010 at 07:27am
  • A Heart Black n Blue

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    'Ello beautiful!xD
    Your last chapters were soooo freakin awesome!
    Really depressing though,but I'm loving the drama,lol=D
    So,first of all,when Shane was thinking of this->"I said nothing, because it felt like if I agreed with her, I would be lying to myself. But, why?"I was like,lmao,oh dear,what's that thing we call love?XD(lol,that's from a song,sorry,but that's what I was singing)
    I also like his and Carly's mother,she seems like a smart,sweet and caring lady=)
    AND THEN YOU HAD TO RUIN MY GOOD MOOD BY MAKING CASSIEL GET ATTACKED-.-
    Just kidding,it was an excellent twist,an extremely well written scene overall and it DEFINATELY made things much more interesting!I loved every line.Literally.=D
    It was..no words can describe it, when the stranger demon guy touched her and she froze,and he carved that phrase on her skin,I think that's one among the best scenes you've ever written..It was beautiful,in a terrifying way.
    And then,we hear about what her parents' and council's true face is I was in shock,I mean,how much more horrible can Cassiel's life get?!How blind and sick inside can they be,to even think of doing something like that to her?!
    And that Colton guy was "away in business" while she was in danger?!Some future husband!
    Anywayz..and now of course we had the goodbye scene..as much as I adore you for the chapters in Shane's pov xD,I hate you for making poor sweet little Jimmy cry so much lately.Broke my heart=(
    But oh well.THEIR QUEST TO FIND TRISTAN FINALLY BEGINS!=D=D=D
    *starts jumping up and down excitedly*
    All in all,fantastic job so far,keep it up=)
    November 19th, 2010 at 09:09pm
  • MrsStarrBayBeh

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    Ok, im addicted lol. Its a really good story with alot going on, i enjoyed it && you made me tear up lol
    November 14th, 2010 at 01:43am
  • kittykandra

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    BOOOOOHOOOOO!!!! Goodbyes are always sad.. :(
    November 13th, 2010 at 11:14pm
  • kittykandra

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    Cassie was acting a bit strange O.o...
    Cool chapter too and loved that it was Shane's POV <33333
    November 7th, 2010 at 04:26am
  • Makebox

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    Love your new chapter. I never saw that coming. I love how you don't expect so much about your story. Update soon! Great job!
    November 2nd, 2010 at 12:27am
  • kittykandra

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    Oh how I hate the Council... Her parents too?! That's just wrong!
    I really hope that despite what Jimmy saw that Cassiel will live.
    I don't want her to die!! T_T
    Is Colton in on this too? Cuz if he is, he sucks...
    November 1st, 2010 at 02:39am
  • SayHeyRay!

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    I loved this story and am completely addicted! I'm subscribed and everything XD
    October 26th, 2010 at 08:07pm
  • kittykandra

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    When I saw the title I was so expecting something else.. Argghh! Lol, If you keep making Shane so sensitive I may have to steal him from your story XD
    Great Chapter though!
    P.S. Whatever happened to the Prince werewolf guy.. I forgot his name :-(
    October 24th, 2010 at 05:02am
  • kittykandra

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    Shane and Cassiel sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g!! Hehe!! Thanks for the update, short but sweet. I hope Jimmy is okay!!
    October 21st, 2010 at 04:09am
  • A Heart Black n Blue

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    Hiya there beautiful!=D
    SOOO SORRY IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO COMMENT!D=
    I really have no idea what happened,I was like,where are my e-mails,I subscribed,didn't I?But still,I haven't reiceved even a single one,so I actually read your 5 latest chapters today..Ugh!=/
    Anywayz,let's just get back to business,lol=)
    All I have to say for those chapters is OH WOW.I mean,really,you've been literally playing with my emotions,lol,at first I was kinda depressed,poor Cassiel was suffering and Zach was a bit of a jerk and made her even sadder(*at Zach*oh,don't worry baby,I still love you!lol=D)and the atmosphere was so heavy,it felt like there was a weight on my chest=(There were also that heartbreakingly sweet moments, such as when Jimmy was crying bloody tears..sniff sniff..=(And then Cassie took off running,I was scared out of my mind,I thought sth bad was going to happen!But things turned out the complete opposite way: she found and saved Shane and Carly's mother!
    Congrats,my dear,that was a plain awesome idea=)It also helped a lot with balancing everything out:from great sorrow to joy.And then we had that touching moment,Shane + Cassiel = big hug!:DSeriously, can you say 'aww'???lol
    P.S.: One amongst my most favourite parts was: "And then I heard it.
    'Cassiel,my Cassiel,come to me,my love',it whispered so closely,and so gently,all I could do was obey"
    It was just beautiful..Keep doing your magic girl!Can't wait to see what's next=D
    October 18th, 2010 at 09:49pm
  • kittykandra

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    Yes!! Some Shane affection! Lol, I love both Zach and Shane!
    October 17th, 2010 at 03:20am
  • SweetLilBabyGirl

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    Love this story!
    October 10th, 2010 at 08:51pm